Made with Gemini 2.0. Flash, then proofread and edited by hand, adding text or removing erroneous / extraneous text. After many hours spent editing, I think this translation is close to what professionals tend to create, so I will let others decide whether to list it as MTL. Either way, I thought this doujin was awesome. I hope you'll enjoy it to!

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Original Japanese version: https://e-hentai.org/g/3378239/e9a31bc86e/

Chinese translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/3500235/c852442789/

Spanish translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/3498799/f69df31715/

Reading OP's claim that they think "this translation is close to what professionals tend to create" and then seeing this gallery tagged as "other: rough translation"... thanks for the laughs.

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Who proofread this? A fucking chimp?

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I'm to the point where, as long as it has readability, it's fine because anyone who is a good reader can easily replace words as they go. But we live in a day and age where the ungrateful become more ungrateful. There's always something to complain about.

Don't get me wrong, I complain at times, no one's perfect. You could argue I'm complaining against the complainers. Most people are here for the obvious, and I guarantee you 90% of individuals on this site would be here for the image sets alone.

People who want high-quality translation either pay someone to do it or do it yourself. If it's not the latter, be grateful we even get translations to begin with. If it says "rough translations" you already know what you're getting. Don't kid yourself, stop complaining and move on if it displeases you.

On a final note, Thanks for the translations Rex. You are doing a good job, don't let people beat you down. Everyone starts somewhere, you will get better if you keep practicing.

Last edited on 27 August 2025, 05:28.

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Thank you @Skippyroo. I started experimenting w/ translation on a whim, and though some of my earlier posts are pretty good, some have many issues such as stray dots, text or white bits that I didn't know how to remove at the time. Now, I do know how to remove, edit, and add text, so I'd like to go back through and improve upon some past uploads. (As I have just done w/ the two Sunagawa Tara Doujins. I was privately really annoyed at how some pages turned out, but didn't have the knowledge / tools to correct these mistakes at the time)... I would certainly encourage people to make their own translations: I think you'll find it's quite an undertaking... And, if I saw a much better English version of something I'd posted, I'd happily take down my own as it'd be redundant.

IMO, the internet tends to have a strong negativity bias, with most people never commenting or engaging on the sites they visit. Despite the uploads I've made easily breaking 100k views collectively, there are barely any comments, which is sometimes in-part because of how websites are structured. So, anyway, thanks for spreading some positivity and encouragemnent. I expect criticism and negativity, some of which I sympathize with! But, I'm not here to debate or argue w/ people; I'm here to post hentai I find beautiful, meaningful, and / or artistically awe-inspiring. All the best to you and hentai fans everywhere! xoxo

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"Then proofread and edited by hand," I really call bullshit on that since you use male pronouns for the dickgirl at points.

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I'm also pretty sure the size of the penis is supposed to make sense, but the OCR butchered it and the "editor" didn't even bother reading.

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@nanamya It should be 18cm because it's Japan and it's metric.

I just fucking hate when people just upload MTL slop and don't even do the most basic proofreading. Furthermore, this dude has the fucking arrogance to act like this is helpful when in reality uploading this slop just makes it a lot less likely that this doujin will ever receive a decent translation.

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