Raws: https://e-hentai.org/g/3336180/c99691af60/

Base +11

Japanese RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/3336180/c99691af60/

KOREAN translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/3397780/4d8b2d92c9/

Base +26

Is this a machine translation? Some of the dialogue doesn't make sense (like the girl in page 2 talking about whether she'd cum from touching someone else's breasts), and it seems like most of the names are wrong (calling the main character 'Tachibana' and 'Rika' instead of his actual name, and calling Ruler 'Ichiyo' instead of Iyo).

Base +6, Rankarana +7

imagine coming to school to see a sign "Penis Inspection Day", and when you turn around, the door is already sealed shut

Base +6

@blargh1123 i would say its more so half assed rather than machine translated.
The names is likely just a different writing in japanese, i have seen the names Rika and Tachibana being used to refer to the gudas in other places and this guy has done fate translations before so most likely this was done either carelessly done over multiple days or done last minute with no proof reading.
If you notice there are far more typos and lack of proper spacing than actual nonsense the machine translations have, look at how ushiwakamaru has a - for some reason even when its not needed for spacing also missed the h in chaldea.

Base +5