It's good, really. However there are some ... details that might be a hit and a miss at people's kinks. For example x-ray vision and pregnancy sign... You can put 1 with those and 1 without those to draw in a broader range of people. And... compared to the ass, you're still too modest with the boobs. It's hentai, remember? No need to keep the "balance of the body" thing. It's sexier to see a female with a body born for sex. "Miss metric" in hentai should still be appreciated by most people.