Content from Patreon.com/instableunicorn August 2024

This is has nice enough visual progression, that it would be at least passable, if it wasn't so badly written. If the art is done by IA, then the story just can't feel like it's written the same way,

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Nice work.

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MMM looks bad.

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i know it's ai, but maybe a minimal bit of editing could have fixed the hands on 17 and 19. otherwise it's not objectionable.

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Can’t wait for part 2

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Love it. Keep it up 👍

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Only criticism aside from the hands is the story's bad ending. Would much prefer if she was consenting and it wasn't just your standard brainwashing. The male mind popping up like it's a psychological horror thriller can really take it out of people. The whiplash was comedic. Other than that, good work. Hope you continue making content.

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