Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/602305/ef9de045c8/

This is a translation not a rewrite. Yes I used to do rewrites. Things change...

@ezrewriter,

You have done a good thing with doing translations. If it was never said to you, I say it now. You have changed for the better. It's not everyday that a person change their hobby and improve upon it.

You have made some good and some bad rewrites in the past. Yet now, you make translations. You learned Japanese and mastered the language enough to not only translate, yet to localize it too.

Thank you.

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I've never expected to see character development out of my porn comics.

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why decensor and make it worse to look at, like id rather look at the raws.

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Thanks for translating this! Also, who's that busty brown babe at the end? WOW

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Ah yes, the typical woman. Lie to your partner, cheat on him once you get some social popularity, then realize what a fucking moron you are and crawl back.

The guy should have just read the letter and went with the other girl.

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I don't know if i would call that character development.

Just a downright stupid whore without any romantic feeling that turned yandere because her backup plan was in danger.

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