Didn't finish the translation: sound effects and some inconsequential dialogue remains in Chinese or Japanese. All dialogue and introspection translated.

Atrocious font choice and typesetting. At least use a comic font instead of Arial / Helvetica. This is an insult to the original work.

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If you're not motived to do all the work that comes with translating a comic into another language, then don't do it at all. Nobody is forcing you to do this.

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Considering it's the first time it was pretty good. A few nitpicky things here and there are holding this back from being a great translation but good on you for attempting this

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Good effort! I'd be willing to wait if you wanted to do a more thorough translation next time, but keep improving!

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Nice, this artist rules

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Comments praising people with stuff like "good effort!" for putting out garbage TLs is why we keep getting them on here.

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I know it's been a few years but I really hope haitoku sensei finishes this story line with the nephew and the son (who claims her back in the sequel): https://e-hentai.org/g/1596284/a8487ee282/

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