The language is...um...how do I put this? Not really easy to follow. If you need help, I can offer my services, for free. You can PM me on the process forums (that I'm pretty sure I've seen you post in) under this name if you're interested.
nice work! you have improved greatly in writing since last episode! splendid! i just love your work, not just this one, all of them!! and let me just say it, i couldn`t do halfway as good as that which you have done! i hope the other female rangers goes into the same destiny as amy and kate ;-) let the evil prevail! (hope that was right written)