Hi, guys, this is my first comic, inspired by an episode of Johnny Bravo, I hope you like it.

Not bad. I hope to see you improve!

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Regarding page 11, the top bubble in the panel is supposed to be read first, not last. As is, it reads like Pops responds to Johnny's explanation with a question that Johnny just answered in the same panel.

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bro, i like the idea, But you have to watch the proportions; it looks like it's stretched upwards, repeat the panel if you need but not stretch the img pls

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This is already very good for a first time comic. Now draw her getting into more sexual situations.

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What is this giant ass and legs abomination? Jonny is huge upper body and tiny lower. This is all wrong.

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@masterzelda123 this is based on the episode Witch-ay Woman where Johnny gets turned into Jenny Brava. In the episode Jenny has a much more balanced body type, so the proportions are right here, albeit thicker and bustier than on model Jenny.

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Excited to see where you go with this (since there's not much in the way of Jenny Bravo)

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This ain’t half bad for your first comic, I can’t wait to see where this goes

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Good job. I hope to see more soon. Don't worry about the comments on proportions, just focus on what you want to create.

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Pretty damn sure it was actually this episode that awoke something in me as a wee lad lol. Please keep going, also the artstyle is really damn close to the show's as well so great job.

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not a bad start!
Many are mentioning the proportions and I see the comic was uploaded in 1280x1791, try a common set of 1280x1981 or similar instead. Best of luck in your future works!

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This is amazing. Keep going! Hope for more cute outfits like maid and cheerleader with pigtails

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When i read this, I can't help but give Johnny a male voice

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Dude !!! This is so damn good , can't wait to see more !

Please please please make it a slow burn if anything sexual happens!

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>"Jhonny" Bravo
Bravo 👏👏👏

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