I'm trying something new for the big vertical text-box-less text on pages like 3,10,17,21 etc. Let me know what you think.

No custom art main page. We thought it would look kinda boring.

Thanks so much to yurtsifu, blahblah331, greatwave, MaidEnjoyer, and Nethan for the helpful edits and suggestions

rub a dub dub thanks for the grub

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メス堕ち means "falling into female-ness" (i.e. "feminization"), not "females who have fallen"

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Feel free to start a petition to rename. I'll even change the subtitle on page 3 to whatever people think is appropriate.
Edit: Just realized I can change it myself. Do you have any suggestions regarding the subtitle?

Last edited on 01 September 2025, 04:04.

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Something like "Strayed into the Village of Feminization" or, given the reveal towards the end, "Led Astray into the Village of Feminization"

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Missing text in bubble on page 7?

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The text for both bubbles is present in the bottom bubble. The top bubble only refers to the food that Haruka and Fuyuko have.

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on page 8 it says: "we were both are outsiders to this village"
and right below it, there's a typo for the word "Permanently"

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There are multiple errors in there.

Page 6, becuase ?
Page 15, basta ? Is the missing three letters intented ?
Page 16, it's cum ?
Page 21, the very first sentence would be better using "once [instead of "if"] your [...] are [remove the word "already"] linked, there is no going back"
Page 23, it is really the ? Is the missed word intented ?

And I did not read the rest for now.

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Page 6: I think "Because" is fine here since he's explaining why they were looking around for lost hikers.
Page 15: Everyone in this comic frequently cuts themselves off due to the frantic nature of what is occurring. My interpretation of the intention was he was midway though thinking "bastard", though any curse would do.
Page 16: It is cum. I guess she could be starting to say 精子出す, but that feels a bit weird the way it's written.
Page 21: To me, "once [something occurs]" implies that the men of the village are doing the something. My interpretation of at least Aki and probably Natsume is that they have the talent to become feminized slaves. This means that the men aren't linking Aki/Natsume's prostate and nipples, they are already linked and the men are just showing them that this is the case. Thus "If [something occurred] already". There are circumstances where I think "once" would be better, but in this case the characters are both femboys and one of them literally wished for this.
Page 23: Natsume is once again cut off. My guess is he was in the middle of thinking "It really is the best", or something to that effect.

I will probably change Page 16 but I don't see the rest of these as errors.
Thanks for the comment!

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I genuinely dislike how so many Japanese manga use "rape" to mean" rough / intense sex", not "nonconsensual sex". At that point in the story, he's clearly into it. So instead of "Those men are ganging up and raping him" I think "Those men are gamging up and fucking him so hard" would be way more accurate

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Feminization village? Bros already looked female before they went in.

Last edited on 06 September 2025, 04:12.

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@Engrish-Transrations :

Page 6 : I wrote "becuase" because it is written like this on this page, with "ua" instead of "au". It is an innocent writing error in your translation :)
Page 21 : I don't see it this way. In the two previous pages, the men and the two "women" seems to be actively building said link. The OPs may have a talent for all of this, but it needs to be... well... extracted, and this is what the men are helping for, starting by this link until Page 21 where it is complete. So I still think that page 21 is incorrect.
Oh, and I may think like this because of a previous work of this artist too, "Messed UP!!", where there is an identical link to be built. The author seems to like reusing this idea : https://e-hentai.org/s/e98faf351e/2195011-15

Page 15/23 : Your explanation makes sense, but it looked like missing letters or word to my eyes. Maybe there is a better way to express these cuts, but I will remove my point on this ones.

Last edited on 06 September 2025, 11:13.

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I appreciate the effort you are putting in to this translation :)

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@blahblah331 Thanks, Sorry the edits took so long >.>

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Wow, I didn't expect to see a v2 translation! Great job adding in all the suggestions

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That's hot, but it would be even hotter if in the end the two friends fucked each other.

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Other langauges and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/3473607/8952976d90/ (uploaded by d.bob)

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pg2 uwu...

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Y'know, I was not expecting this story, where the whole point is forcefemming these outsider boys, to include a still obviously masculine local taking it from one of the previously-transitioned ladies. I mean, go them, but it seems counter to the established themes.

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