幼儿园第一名作品

Base +2, Foxtide888 -11, Imsolo -6

@Foxtide888

You made it a bit too complex with this one. Still a good read and use of anti-NTR. Just the beginning was a little too much complex storytelling.

Still a good read.

Base +6, Foxtide888 +11, Imsolo +6

I like that I'm seeing paizuri! Your characters often make note of the huge boobs the women tend to have, but they don't usually do much with them.
I didn't find the story especially convoluted or hard to follow.

Base +7