Hello this is my first time translating and cleaning/redrawing I'm learning Japanese and using these to practice, especially the Kanji I'm searching it up if i saw new kanji and translating them within the context Since English is not my first language too Any feedback is appreciated Thank you very much
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Posted on 18 September 2025, 05:14 by: red death68
Score +52
No major errors from what I can see with a quick read through. That being said I question translating from a language you are learning into a language that is not your native language.
@red death68 i call it 2 birds with 1 stone, since i can speak/write English pretty well online with friends but the problem lies with the grammar and wording, since my friends doesn't really care about those, it's hard for me to improve on it