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[Wakusei Nostalgia (Tokiwa Midori)] Osananajimi no Futago Gal ni Chikubi o Kaihatsu Sareta Ore | My Twin Childhood Friends are Extremely Naughty [English] [Comics Enjoyer Translation] [Digital]

[惑星ノスタルジー (常磐緑)] 幼馴染の双子ギャルに乳首を開発された俺 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2025-09-20 17:27
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Language:English  RW
File Size:50.79 MiB
Length:38 pages
Favorited:833 times
Rating:
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Posted on 20 September 2025, 17:27 by:   Ertuwoop    PM
Uploader Comment
Hello everyone!

Here’s this weekend’s comic! I hope you enjoy it 💕
If you have any suggestions for other comics you’d like to see translated, feel free to message me for free on Fansly:
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About My Process

I release one free translation every Saturday on e-hentai, and several new ones each week on Fansly, sometimes more if I’m in a good mood 😄
There are already over 50 translated comics available exclusively on Fansly, so don’t miss them!

To whet your appetite, here are two raw previews of comics already translated:
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Comic Related Links
Other version on e-hentai: https://e-hentai.org/g/3276035/1981eb52a2/
DLsite: N/A
Artist: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/5156833

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Posted on 20 September 2025, 17:35 by:   Kira10    PM
Score +24
Yoooo Tokiwa Midori tranlsation? Thanks for the TL m(_ _)m

edit:oh no it's MTL ? my bad, feels like when I retweet art on twitter now, before I realize it was AI (´;ω;`)
Last edited on 20 September 2025, 21:49.
Posted on 20 September 2025, 17:37 by:   pekcun    PM
Score +164
So I can only read the furigana in the raws but the girls are supposed to be named Mafuyu and Manatsu while the protag is supposed to be Haruaki.
Lightly edited MTL perhaps?

Edit: Okay, it's not MTL.
I took a random page, page 10 for comparison:
https://e-hentai.org/s/30b5b1c6b2/3267411-10
https://e-hentai.org/s/d052415027/3545569-10
Notice how on the upper left corner, the line mentioning Mafuyu's name has been rewritten to "Hfffh!!"

Rewrite tag, please.
Last edited on 20 September 2025, 17:54.
Posted on 20 September 2025, 18:45 by:   Gremh    PM
Score +138
This dude does MTLs lol. It's of the Chinese if line 40 on that aforementioned spreadsheet is to go by.

PS: https://e-hentai.org/s/cad047205d/3500325-23 (look mid-left)
Posted on 20 September 2025, 19:00 by:   crusher330    PM
Score +104
yeah comparing page 10 is hilarious essentially every text bubble is just rewritten.

"So why'd you brazenly come to our house?"

"It's not like you came here to play hide n seek or catch bugs" (for some reason this one is actually right)

something like "Mafuyu?? What're you doing?"

"Hey, check out his dick.."

"He's getting erect isn't he?"

"Oi, he's totally on board isn't he?" (direct translation is [oi, completely fully motivated isn't it/he])

"no..."

Not even sure how they do basic things like turn ちがっ。。。 into "No!"

just slapping these into google translate would be better.

@Gremh LMAO. why'd I waste my time even writing this. Make sure to sub to this poorly done mtl patreon everyone.
Posted on 20 September 2025, 19:11 by:   Ertuwoop    PM
Score -100
My goal is to make the story understandable for everyone and to write it in clear English. I do all of this for free, I’m not forcing anyone to pay or read my work, and I know that many people appreciate these translations like @Kira10, who said thanks.
Each translation takes me a lot of time usually a full day of work even if it isn’t perfect.
If you think the story’s meaning isn’t being preserved, or if there are serious English mistakes, please tell me that feedback helps. But nitpicking tiny word choices isn’t very constructive. We all have lives and limited time.
Posted on 20 September 2025, 19:16 by:   Gremh    PM
Score +162
Also dripfeeding a third a TL at first (https://e-hentai.org/g/3447377/b6db37eb98/) and passing off another TL as one's own work (https://e-hentai.org/g/3490700/6d8e092ea5/). Just a dreadful uploader.

@Ertuwoop Perfectly normal for those who've taken up real translation to sink a number of days into a project.
Last edited on 20 September 2025, 19:37.
Posted on 20 September 2025, 21:37 by:   Marh    PM
Score +150
@Ertuwoop Dude, it's not "tiny word choices" you changed the characters names and omitted dialogue. How's that making the story understandable?
Posted on 20 September 2025, 23:27 by:   DJ_Puchuu    PM
Score +79
Aw sweet, Tokiwa Midori transla-
>rewrite
Go fuck yourself, you stupid ignorant fuck. I sincerely hope the artist signs up with Irodori, just so retards like you can't ruin his works anymore (bad enough that that fucktard ThatDudePirate ruined Pla-Pura with MTL, now this shit...)

"My goal is to make the story understandable for everyone and to write it in clear English."
THAT'S WHAT A TRANSLATION IS, YOU IDIOT! All your sorry ass did was rewrite everything. You're no better than those guys who would post incest rewrites on /b/ back in the day (man, I'm old).
Last edited on 22 September 2025, 13:17.
Posted on 21 September 2025, 05:26 by:   davidgraham2121    PM
Score +30
@Ertuwoop never upload anything again

@Ertuwoop never upload anything again
Posted on 22 September 2025, 22:17 by:   phoenixneo1630    PM
Score +52
It looks like your Patreon is gone.
Good. Asking for money for MTL's done with machine proofreading is as bad as it gets, especially when you don't even use the original source for your translation (such as when you "translate" the Chinese translation for some of your works).
Learn some Japanese. At least get the basics down. If you want to use Google or websites like "jisho" to find the meaning of specific words, that's fine (and can even teach you some new words). But you should at least know the grammar. And don't use Google or AI to proofread for you. Do the proofreading yourself.
If you can do at least that much, then it'd be fine to start asking for money.
Posted on 26 September 2025, 05:15 by:   tidman    PM
Score +28
new name? new blacklist
Posted on 10 October 2025, 20:36 by:   Ertuwoop    PM
Score -16
@Fansly/ComicsEnjoyer
Posted on 19 October 2025, 02:57 by:   Khongt62    PM
Score -5
Check forum dm's

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