Shitty AI translation and AWFUL typesetting, but the art and story are good

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Lolicon tag is kind of weird. The two are in classmates, if she is a loli then he is a shota.

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Translation is terrible. Lot's of He/She mistakes. Obviously MTL with little to no proof reading.

Also, despite frequently defending the Lolicon tag... I gotta agree it does not belong here at all. Nothing about her character art conveys "undeveloped" in any way.

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I thought I'd seen this author's art somewhere before so it was the same artist from that manga series lol.
Also it seems the characters here are a rehash/reboot? of the author's previous series?(the one with French title and long hair girl heroine)
They even have the same name(Takahashi and Yamamoto) but different appearance and character which had me confused.
But the main difference is the heroine in this one is only a second/side character in the previous work and she doesn't have a mole there and wears glasses by default(meek, timid kind) and the mc also looks different(doesn't wear glasses, looks like a typical shounen mc, not glasses intellectual type like this one). The heroine in the previous work is a long hair girl who loves semen(she does fellatio to any guy after school) and the previous Takahashi(MC in that one) is a cuck who falls in love with her, and gets her to do fellatio for him as well, and finally sex but even after all that, she still doesn't stop blowing other guys because she loves semen. When MC even invites her to a date, she refuses and only caves in after putting a condition that MC is restricted from masturbating for a while and she will get her semen from other guys in the meantime.
So I guess the author removes her from this one, or maybe she will appear in the future as a new slut character or maybe the main heroine(Yamamoto) will become the cheating whore this time.

Last edited on 16 October 2025, 15:15.

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