Been a while since I did a rewrite... I posted... again, as I said in the foreword, this was similar to the lazyfish rewrite wanting to do a grammar fix, but wanted to go a step further.
(Also, I originally wanted to be explicit with Legoshi's canon age when he DIDN'T have the eye scar, but i decided to cut that)
As usual, no slight on the original work, This was done purely for fun.
Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2374693/8bcf63b089/

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