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Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3508886/8d4aeabf3e/ (uploaded by hobohobo)

Why are you using Chinese names?

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Because there wasn't any English translation for this doujinshi yet. And I used a free manga translation add-on on fire to do a quick translation of it

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OK seriously, what the hell is that relationship chart near the end? The author posted that before in another of his work, and I still have no idea what's that even about or for.

Base +6, fazer97 -5, greatwave +6

This translation is garbage. Do some cleanup or, like anything.

Base +6, greatwave +6, Sicil +6, FillerName105 +4, cacatel +6, porno-mancer +6

Ughh I don't wanna be feminized by some gross fucking shit head I want handsome studs or devious twinks. It's hard to get off to when picturing a gross guy fucking me :(

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nigh unreadable dogshit. the translation is bad enough but the typesetting, font size, etc...

letdown. save us mm3

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what a beautiful Duwang

Base +6, Zemyih +6, Hotsky +6, greatwave +6, Sicil +6

This is unreadable, very disappointing.

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@Chronic Logic: It is just to show that the fat brother isn't the son of the father but instead of the fatso that NTRed his wife(mother).

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Did you genuinely translate the guy's eyes on Pg. 12 and 20????

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Nice translation, I really appreciate when he said WAAAAAH OONBEU. Very good characterization of a French Viking's warcry; I truly felt connected with the character on a deeper level after reading this.

In all seriousness though, I gotta say sorry bros, but I really didn't like the trap in this one. Something about the face didn't do it for me, there are too many panels where his face almost looks like he has the downs. But there's a good chance I'll do it eventually just because Gomabura deserves better than this and the editing didn't seem super difficult. Some other nice trap uploads first though.

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Whoever did this needs to have his hands permanently maimed so that he'll never translate another manga again.

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