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Seems like at the end she's become a yandere.

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Hey @Ertuwoop, you accidentally linked the Chinese translation as the raw. The actual raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1709983/e118f2b14b/

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@Rawru Changed thanks

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You translated "私... 女の子になってる！？" to "Am I a little girl?"

It's probably because you used MTL (as you admitted to in another translation), but there's definitely some contextual issues here.
"女の子" can mean "little girl", but it can also just mean "girl". And she DEFINITELY is not a little girl. You also changed an exclaimed question into a simple question (taking out the exclamation mark).

I get that English isn't your first language. And I get that MTL can be easier. But at least have a native English speaker proofread for you (you mentioned on another post that you have ChatGPT do the proofreading for you). A native English speaker (not a machine) can really help you with certain parts, especially if they can see the original raw compared to your translation.

And, as I mentioned in another of your works, asking for money on Patreon for MTL'd works is shitty. Even more so if you don't have an actual human do the full proofreading.

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Good god I'm so sick of the same goddamn boring mind control borderline rape story coming out of this group.

Can we have a vanilla TSF or something?

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spamming new versions of the same gallery just to insert the ads of your shitty MTL grift should be a bannable offense.

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friends do not murder their friends.

don't really like a doujin that starts with murder.

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No one cares about your grift, stop updating old galleries to add the same fucking ad page you already have at the end of it.

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