Wholesome bro fucking bro doujin, thank you for translating.

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Yup, great stuff, very hot, thanks a lot for all the effort and sharing to all involved, nice work :)

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This title makes perfect sense, I'm sold

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So cute, I wish femboys were real

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My last two brain cells watching this.

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Pg.1 You really couldn't fit a single letter in that middle panel to not make it look so goofy ?

"countrysid
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Pg.1 Weird decision to have it be the only page where you translated「お兄さん」into "Buddy"

Pg. 5 Why have you suddently used different pronoun "[Their] smile is so cute" when the bubble is just 「笑顔が 可愛かったり』 and since you have already written "[He's] cheeky..." on the very same page ?

Pg.29 Why have you translated the last bubble 「きゅうううう」which is just an onomatopoeia for "Squeeze" into "Kyu-kotsu?" ?
Considering that this is what MTL would probably spew out I am honestly questioning the accuracy of the whole translation but I don't have time to check everything

But I have quickly checked your publish history, you have already made a mess with your translations beforehand and never bothered to fix them even when mistakes were pointed out, and the fact that you at least once used Chinese translation of Japanese raws that are not available on EH to MTL and rewritten it into English in [Chelchel Park (Rachel)] Class no Ichigun Gal wa Ore no Kawaii Pet | The Group of Gals in My Class Are My Cute Pets [English]

So I am left wondering why are you doing these half shoddy translations then ? If to improve your language skills then its not going to work, its been proven time and time again, and you are just going to pollute this site with MTL slop, its garbage in garbage out with them, stop using MTLs to learn, use a good Japanese dictionary and learn the signs and words like someone actually properly trying to learn, here is one of the good ones available online: https://jisho.org/

And if you want to genuienly improve the quality of your editing, below are great resources you should familliarize yourself with, learning to use them by first fixing what you have already posted would be a good start

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide?tab=chapters
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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Appreciate the feedback. I like experimenting a bit instead of doing literal one-to-one translations. I did take a look at your uploads for reference and you clearly know what you’re talking about. Thanks for the resources though.

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So is this MTL or not? Depending on the answer I might read this or not, the art looks good but if it has a shit translation I wont bother

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@Mistermd It is not a MTL it is just not translated one-to-one word-for-word from the original Japanese as I like to cater most of, at least my latest translations, to how I speak English and how I interprit the works.

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The art is a bit rough around the edges sometimes, but still good, nothing like a tanned femboy to lift up the spirits, i'm glad they ended up together.

The translation could use some work, maybe a proofreader might have helped a lot there, i hope you read the suggestions and update this work with fixes in the future

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man after actually experiencing the japanese summer i cant jack it to these summertime comics anymore. t was too hot to even jack off in the air bnb while the ac was broken, let alone try and fuck

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