I saw a translation of this one posted, and was rather dissatisfied with the cleaning. Cleaning is often quite hard, but it's a lot harder to justify a poor job when the blank pages are freely available. It eventually turned into a complete overhaul once I started correcting things like "they" instead of "he".

I'm not generally a fan of this artist, but when he does something where the women still look like women at the end, he does a pretty good job. I hope you enjoy it.

The prior english version is here:

https://e-hentai.org/g/3591000/9c5548326a/

The raw is here:

https://e-hentai.org/g/2948372/a04cae4fc0/

You did a good job.

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Did not expect the SMT reference in Otaku-kun's settei.

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Been a while since I last saw fan no hitori without some sort of body horror fucking

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"It eventually turned into a complete overhaul once I started correcting things like "they" instead of "he"."

If you mean the part where it says [ミオのやつに突き出すと手続じゃなんじゃと面倒じゃしここで殺しておくかの♪] in page 1, the "them" could actually be gramattically correct in the context of the statement where Kuzunoha is suggesting to kill the man and destroying the suspected cursed item that Ayame was alluding to in panel 2. It suggests Kuzunoha would rather skip the hassle of filing the fact she took the cursed object from a civilian and just get rid of both at the same time.

Don't get me wrong, I think the OG TL is still dogwater, but that specific gripe just feels like a weird one

EDIT: So I double-checked that specific line with a few JP-EN TL acquaintances of mine--

[まぁ見るからに社会性なさそうなキモオタだし仕方なしでありんすな]

While your translation is accurate, 'they' is still a valid option here, if less preferred. In the context of how the setting is generally presented, Ayame using 'they' actually does work as a sense of distancing. Plus, you can make the argument that your TL is actually a bit less correct, since whether she's talking to the otaku or Kuzunoha is actually left a bit ambiguous in the original text, but it implies it's more to the latter. Ayame and Kuzunoha generally were taking a really dismissive tone in their conversation when it was about him and were kind of blowing him off to complain about work, as seen in the next panel on the page.

idk, just my 2 cents

Last edited on 31 October 2025, 10:29.

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@gespens

Actually, it was the bubble where ayame says "they look like a socially awkward weirdo", when any proper english reading would use "he looks like" in this context.

Once I started digging into the text, though, pandora's box was opened, so I just redid everything from scratch.

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What the hell, they somehow kept all their limbs and soul intact?

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A happy ending of any kind from fan no hitori is like an undercooked steak.

It's really rare.

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the demons faired better than the usual JK taimabu cast who are raped forever and then turned into cement and so on

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Big thanks for the work you put into this second version.

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Good job on it! Glad it’s infinitely better than my version!

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