Rough translation more like RAPED translation

Base +6, PossessionDesire -6, Afbuster +6, pipowaw +6, BUTTMAN9000 +6, shrinkos +7, Psychotic Pastry +6, BaperNu +9, Qwerty2 +8

Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/3587934/e3998c5f26/ (uploaded by hekantonkheires)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3594995/cb85592768/ (uploaded by oOuOwwxoo)

Base +48

Look. I'm not gonna go into the translation, because you clearly don't give a fuck about actually translating (especially given the amount of Japanese just left in because I guess whatever AI you used could not read it). But I WILL tell you that your typesetting makes this painful to read (well... even MORE painful to read). For example, page 20 REALLY stood out to me with the bubbles in the bottom right panel. Centering your text into the bubbles is key, or else it looks ugly. If it's too big, try either using a smaller font or using shorter synonyms of words. Keep your text inside your bubbles as best as you can. I get that sometimes it's not possible, but in most cases it's 100% possible. For example, on page 19, all you had to do was rearrange the 5 hearts (maybe put "cum" on top and then make a pseudo pyramid with two hearts on the next line and the last three on the bottom.

At least you aren't asking for payment for this crap. Because I'm wanting a refund, even though I'm able to read it for free.

Base +8, BUTTMAN9000 +6, mar-bcrle +7, sagematt +8, Woody Pack +6, Vanilla GB lover +6, smile_spoot +6, Passtin -6, shrinkos +7, Psychotic Pastry +6, kirby47 +6

If I had a nickel for every time the MC was offered free sex with a woman only to turn it down and get turned into a woman instead, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice

For those curious: https://e-hentai.org/g/3154967/bc5cb357e8/

Base +6, Haxton Fale +6, Hardart +6

Ah, the countermeasure to economics and poor social structures causing extremely low birth rates.

Base +6, Hardart +6

Very smart way to recycle failed men. Lol

Base +8, -S- -6