https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_652376/

So what can I even say? Tbh, it’s a good thing these guys know how to draw cuz it’s a shame their talent for writing plots doesn’t match their art skills.

Mixing different themes is already pretty tricky but this author does it especially poorly because he insists on blending everything with netorare and it always ends up taking over, making the rest of the plot and other themes completely pointless.

In one of his previous works, he tried mixing netorase and netorare and it completely ruined the netorase aspect of the story.

In this one, everything is in Haruto’s (blond) favor, even though it could’ve been a fair exchange. In both parts 1 and 2, he gets way more scenes and much more variety. Parc sex scenes, filming scenes, anal scene, threesome with his mother and Shiho in front of Minato.. (dark hair boy)
Minato can’t satisfy Shiho (his mother), yet somehow he can satisfy Luna (Haruto’s mother)?? Luna says she wants Minato but still “cheats” on him with Haruto right in front of him?
Even the pregnancy scene, which could’ve been balanced between both pairs… nope, it’s only for Haruto and Shiho. Minato and Luna get a tiny page without even penetration just a reminder they still exist.

I’ve said it before but this author just makes netorare disguised as other genres and it’s really poorly written…
I feel like saying, good thing I’m not paying for this lol

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prequel
https://e-hentai.org/g/3523455/3f651040b8/

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