I always enjoy the incesutal concept of slutty Robin with feral Chopper, and the art's decent, but the writing needs heavy editing. You've written so many words you can't even put your narrative and your dialogue on the same page and have to double. Trim down both and make it one page. Also, always separate the different versions of a comic (if you really feel like they all need to be uploaded in the first place), we don't jerk off to all possible versions of a single image before proceeding with the story.