I will soon update my initial upload, in which you will be able to read everything and download torrent in one place, sorry for not doing it from the start, I am relatively new to this platform and faced some issues with some of the chapters being hidden from public view, but now I figured out why it's happening and will consider this in future uploads and works.
The ending was an intresting choice. I didn't expect a happy end for Fiora but there we go. She really earned herself some liberty after all she has gone through I guess.
The only thing I would criticize about the story would be that the chapters are a bit inconsistent but overall I really enjoyed the read.
I hope you will stay motivated to create more, as there is some serious potential in this work.
Thanks Xatos, you supported me from the very start, I appreciate it. If you want - you can let me know who your favorite anime/game character is and I will try to make a story about her or include in next series.
I think incosistency came from 2 points: first is that I faced restriction problems during the uploads and tried to fix them during the process (didn't want to make more monsters because these chapters would keep getting hidden). And second - when I started I planned to make only 20 pages story, but it got up to 200 pages in the end.
I planned happy ending from the very start. My idea was that no matter how things are bad or hard or what negative stuff may happen to the person, they still deserve to be happy. I don't know if something like this should be in hentai manga, maybe everyone just want to see 1000 pictures of well known characters being banged. But I personally don't think so - my favorites hentai doujins and mangas has really cool stories (like Shindol, actually one of his works inspired me to do this one) and I think story is what makes it cool.
Even if you didn't plan for the story to be this long it turned out good. I also totally agree that a story can add a lot to a doujinshi. It still may be a naughty reading experience but it is much different from an image gallery. I guess it gives the work some sort of substance instead of it being just a quick fap lol.
Thank you for the offer to include a character I would like to see. I'd love to see Samus from Metroid in one of your stories. But I'm not sure if she fits in a fantasy story like Fiora in this one though.