@sgomma3: You should give your work to someone who can proofread it. Also, try to make more quality instead of quantity. Your comics look like you are playing with barbie dolls. Add shadows, let the characters act more naturally to their environment. They lie on the beds like sticks and sit the same way. And instead of putting everything in speechbubbles, you could also add "normal" text.
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