To be continued...??? Ohhh nooo....

Please, let the next part be the FINAL one, OK? There's FAR too much of this soap opera.

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@Sovann: Seeing the new side stories about the twin boys & their mother, or Shonda & her brother, I'm afraid this series will drag on for quite a while. Shame. Pegasus Smith should keep his stories shorter instead of extending them artificially.

Looking back at the previous chapters, I think "Au Naturel" should have ended after Dylan met the guru and had soul-bonding sex with his mother (chapter 12). Maybe a 13th chapter to conclude things but that's it.

If Pegasus Smith wanted to go on with stories in the nudist resort (it's a nice place for kinky adventures after all), I think he should have done an anthology of short stories instead.

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A couple of the images are out of order. I like this series.

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