Missing 2 pages:
https://e-hentai.org/s/a15285b1d1/2898940-12
https://e-hentai.org/s/890240c602/2898940-13

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Please fix the two missing pages!! This story is so good!

Base +6, xxxsonic +6

Nobody is paying for that patreon thing. We will just wait until somebody uploads it here. XD

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This definitely isn't it.

It has a host of problems from sloppy cleaning, to lower res scans, and most importantly suspect parts of the translation.
・Sloppy cleaning in text bubbles in almost every page; there are stray marks you didn't clean up.
・Lower res scans from the Mandarin scans (https://e-hentai.org/g/2943969/fb183ebd48/).
・Some really liberal translations on P.11:
"It's the ritual of this town, the ritual of manhood" ≠ "啊？啊啊、對了日葵在你10歲的時候帶你去東京了啊" or "あん? ああ、 そうか日葵はおめえが10歳ときに東京行ったんだっけな".
"Your mother couldn't take her away from you after all" ≠ "啊、今年的擔當是日葵呢" or "あ、そういや、今年の担当は日葵だったな"
(CN: https://e-hentai.org/s/3154d1d061/2943969-11 or JP: https://e-hentai.org/s/5b9c105ae4/2898940-11)

P.7 "Will you travel to your town tomorrow?" Not wrong but not what any English speaker would say: "Will you travel back to your hometown tomorrow?"
P.10 "whereis" is a typo.
P.11 "Your mother couldn't take her away from you after all". This sentence makes no sense in and out of context of the conversation.
P.13 "That when a man turns 10..." is a mistranslation made from the Mandarin TL.
The original Japanese text has it as "1〇" not :10". The "〇" here is meant to be substituted by any number (0-9). (https://e-hentai.org/s/e4fce0de87/2898940-15)

There's probably more but I'll pass on pointing out all your mistakes.

@Chunga
Makes sense. I had my suspicions since the prose was off and there was poor cleaning - both signs of MTL. Thanks for the tipoff.

Last edited on 08 November 2025, 05:04.

Base +7, Inkstar771 +6, kagezoro +6, DrunkenWeeb +22, Fandarel +13, HonorableShogun +9, sungoer +10

I’d read a paywalled Doujin . Com translation of this than this translation…

Base +6, sungoer +10

Is this just a translation of the Spanish version? It's also missing pages 12 and 13 of the original.

Base +6

Considering the last page, he's probably paywalling it behind his retarded and hypocrite pateron page, which should be taken down soon anyway.

Besides, this guy's really is just a fucktard. He's done so many mistakes and provided the low-res version, this translation is completely fucked, no better than any MTL trashcan upload. He's just some faggot who's pickpocketing ppl. This is a hard pass, just block the uploader if you can.

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He's just another MTL grifter, here are all his previous accounts, the only difference now is that he stopped inserting his shitty watermark since it was giving him away.

https://e-hentai.org/uploader/koreami
https://e-hentai.org/uploader/craftmc
https://e-hentai.org/uploader/maryclow

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@Chunga
who can't be bothered with the most rudimentary proof reading. Page 16 is precious: "Listen overyonemy mother [...]"

Base +20

this is quite obvious a MTL

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