fixed as promised

forget rough translation the typesetting is overlapping in places

Base +7, herpderp5545 +8, luyten +13, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, Pairadix +6, Eden of Shirock +6, jgoo1 +7, ZaHallen +6, Itsukkkkka +5

Great art ruined by a garbage translation.

Base +7, ZAZAAZ +9, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, Pairadix +6, jgoo1 +7, Braddash +5, ZaHallen +6, Itsukkkkka +5

Why is Qingyi's name overlapping and in a different font in almost every speech bubble where it's mentioned? What a shit ass job.

Base +6, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, jgoo1 +7

rough translation, text overlapping. This was clearly done without a check of any kind, Paetone=Phaethon being the biggest indicator, but also Qingyi referring to herself as a gem instead of an android when it's clear that's what she meant.

Base +6, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, jgoo1 +7

Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3506269/0cc6746d95/ (uploaded by hobohobo)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3552537/6b3eb9988f/ (uploaded by qq3870990)
Korean (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3547327/83d5f96cbb/ (uploaded by Disowned)

Base +48, herpderp5545 +8

sorry guys, the formatting got all fucked up when i uploaded, ill fix it later

Base +1, jgoo1 -7, ZaHallen -6, Sol Lazarus -6, MaouMaou -10, WildCrow -13

This clearly is MTL, no doubt. Uploader is just another griefer.

There is no such thing like formatting getting fucked after uploading, that's bullshit. You only want download counts.

Base +6, jgoo1 +7, Ahegaosensei +6, ZaHallen +6

bro its a porn site why tf would i care about downloads 😭

Base +1, jgoo1 -7, Ahegaosensei -6, ZaHallen -6, Sol Lazarus -6, herpderp5545 -8, WildCrow -13

If you don't care about downloads then why would you upload garbage like this in the first place? It clearly isn't because you think you did a good job and want to share it, because you can't even have looked at it once yourself to see whether it was in a readable state, or you would have noticed the problems immediately.

Base +13

its mostly for myself, what do downloads here even do? this a fresh account man

fixed as promised

i did not know the hentai community was so serious 😭

Last edited on 10 November 2025, 06:30.

Base +1, Sol Lazarus -6, MaouMaou -10, WildCrow -13, Anvenjade -8