fixed as promised

forget rough translation the typesetting is overlapping in places

Base +7, herpderp5545 +8, luyten +13, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, Pairadix +6, Eden of Shirock +6, jgoo1 +7, ZaHallen +6, Itsukkkkka +5

Great art ruined by a garbage translation.

Base +7, ZAZAAZ +9, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, Pairadix +6, jgoo1 +7, Braddash +5, ZaHallen +6, Itsukkkkka +5

Why is Qingyi's name overlapping and in a different font in almost every speech bubble where it's mentioned? What a shit ass job.

Base +6, dasdk +17, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, jgoo1 +7

rough translation, text overlapping. This was clearly done without a check of any kind, Paetone=Phaethon being the biggest indicator, but also Qingyi referring to herself as a gem instead of an android when it's clear that's what she meant.

Base +6, Blightfire +9, mgran52 +9, jgoo1 +7

Other languages and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3506269/0cc6746d95/ (uploaded by hobohobo)
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/3552537/6b3eb9988f/ (uploaded by qq3870990)
Korean (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3547327/83d5f96cbb/ (uploaded by Disowned)

Base +48, herpderp5545 +8

sorry guys, the formatting got all fucked up when i uploaded, ill fix it later

Base +1, jgoo1 -7, ZaHallen -6, Sol Lazarus -6, MaouMaou -10, WildCrow -13, Mandraken -6, HakuWillReturn -7

This clearly is MTL, no doubt. Uploader is just another griefer.

There is no such thing like formatting getting fucked after uploading, that's bullshit. You only want download counts.

Base +6, jgoo1 +7, Ahegaosensei +6, ZaHallen +6, Mandraken -6, Fandarel +13

bro its a porn site why tf would i care about downloads 😭

Base +1, jgoo1 -7, Ahegaosensei -6, ZaHallen -6, Sol Lazarus -6, herpderp5545 -8, WildCrow -13, Mandraken -6, HakuWillReturn -7

If you don't care about downloads then why would you upload garbage like this in the first place? It clearly isn't because you think you did a good job and want to share it, because you can't even have looked at it once yourself to see whether it was in a readable state, or you would have noticed the problems immediately.

Base +13, Fandarel +13

its mostly for myself, what do downloads here even do? this a fresh account man

fixed as promised

i did not know the hentai community was so serious 😭

Last edited on 10 November 2025, 06:30.

Base +1, Sol Lazarus -6, MaouMaou -10, WildCrow -13, Anvenjade -8, Mandraken -6, tempopopo -6, HakuWillReturn -7

Hey buddy ! I'm here to saying that don't mind all these mean comment !

I feel sorry for newcomer to get these bad and unwelcome treatmeant BUT there is a reason though. You see, this site is very professional in term of translate something and if you upload MTL or AI translate, you will get stoned to death.

But don't discourage by that ! Or the low rating you get, english is not my mother language so I can read and understand MTL or AI translation no problem and I don't mind much about grammartically.

So, feel free to continue and ignore the comment section, you won't get ban or anything by upload MTL or AI translatation it's not against the rule. Or not if you don't want to see these comments.

Base +7, Mandraken -6, sohaiz -6

MTL dogshit, never upload again

Base +6

Literally anyone can mtl if they wanted to see this kind of crap, why would you upload it as if this didn't just clog up space. No value except dissuading a good tl.

Base +6