Hi, I explained myself at the last page, look there for context as to who's this bozo.

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your fucking problem is no one asked you to share this crap.

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@matxeon. thanks man, really made my day.

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You cucks are really desperate for your slop huh, at least pay for a competent translation instead of using AI

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The translation than nobody asked...

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You can't just dismiss criticism by saying "inb4 people call me a retard lmao". Please fuck off and never come back.

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If there's any translator out there that hate me so much that he'd be willing to replace this allegedly worst translation that's ever roamed the earth, feel free to do so, I'd appreciated it, dm me and I'll provide you the textless version I cleaned.

Last edited on 15 November 2025, 12:22.

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Napalm definitely napalm

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This was too retarded even for ntr

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Should I be upset that I was exposed to to translation slop or that I was exposed to one of the most retarded NTR I have read in months?

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AI translation aside , I really like the slow burn story.
The wife trauma are written believably.

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If you passed this off as manual translation, I don't think these people would have been able to tell.
People on this site live to shit on AI when they could easily blacklist the rough translation tag

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AI translation or not, the way this story escalates is silly. You may as well add a mind control tag because she walks into the first session as an intelligent, rational, sharp person, gets buried in red flags, and somehow decides to ignore all of them and cheat on her husband 30 minutes into it. The sex is apparently so amazing that she spends the rest of the story, with zero guilt, continuing to not question the red flags, turning into a completely different person, who is cruel and obsessed with sex and makeup.

The husband gets it worse. While he is definitely shown to be too nice and trusting, when the truth is revealed he rapidly shifts from anger and desire to take action into a massive cuck who won't do anything even if he knows he's being used. He probably could win back his wife. But the writing needs him to be a cuck, so he is. This shift happens in less than a few hours at most.

In both cases, the wife and husband immediately stop acting like the normal people they were written to be, because the story demands it.

Every story from this author is like this, unfortunately. A shame too, because when the art isn't borderline sketch work, it's pretty good.

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