Hi everyone,

these are the first few pages of chapter 6 of my Story Forbidden Fruits. Enjoy!

I lost track of this somewhere.

Heh, pineapple juice...

I really hate poor communication tropes, but that seems to be the theme, more for this than the Mother's Shame one.
But other than that, I think things are coming along nicely now. For my own preferences, I hope we get some sister x sister before we get to threesome action.

Base +7, electrocardia +10

We're up to page 159 now. On another note, there are some scenes / scenarios / character body types I'm not a big fan of and since I'm not paying $$$ for these comics I will not critique them. I'm not the writer so far be it for me to judge their vision, especially since I'm not paying for them.

Base +6, Sugoi Kukodesai +13

Hmm, nice pics, pity about the ridiculously verbose narrative, and particularly the thought processes. Nobody, but nobody has thoughts as flowery as that. Still, good effort, looking forward to further chapters!

Base +3, RoseGoldx +7

This and the other chapters need a torrent. The archives are too expensive. 30,000 points for the one archive alone.

Base +6, Sugoi Kukodesai +13