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[Genkai Hatsudensho (Nakamo)] Onna Gal Joushi to Furin suru Hanashi 4

[限界発電所 (那鴨)] 女ギャル上司と不倫する話 4

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Posted:2025-11-20 15:02
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Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:02 by:   fellowfapper    PM
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https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_681086/
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:06 by:   a781824656    PM
Score +18
不儿 重生了?
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:09 by:   hobohobo    PM
Score +75
looks like people called it last chapter.
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:15 by:   Zypher~    PM
Score +59
Wait a minute. Did he fucking time travel?
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:26 by:   kyuihu    PM
Score +74
不是,刚想说整的什么jb烂活,怎么变命运石之门了?不会最后来个梦结局吧
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:26 by:   伪善的恶人    PM
Score +29
啥玩意,咋又突然一转黄毛
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:28 by:   anhunwen    PM
Score +26
原来是Back to the future,我还以为是什么后宫黄漫呢。
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:28 by:   Wizard123123123    PM
Score +134
所以,这是表达什么?前三篇打炮打爽了,然后这篇给前男友拐跑了?那前三篇画了干嘛?
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:35 by:   -Hiiro-    PM
Score +95
[Synopsis]

The three of them; a gal boss, his wife and him spend their peaceful days together in love and sex.
However, when an 'unforgettable ex-boyfriend' appears, ripples begin to spread in their quiet relationship.

Raw

1 - https://e-hentai.org/g/3435011/94efc03ece/
2 - https://e-hentai.org/g/3450325/f881ef1e51/
3 - https://e-hentai.org/g/3521032/d259f87587/

English translation

1 (CastleTL) - https://e-hentai.org/g/3471739/b391feae03/

2 (CastleTL) - https://e-hentai.org/g/3474674/2da3815389/
2 (MultiTL) - https://e-hentai.org/g/3492686/2951f9a763/

3 (CastleTL) - https://e-hentai.org/g/3552547/d555315fcd/
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:41 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +287
How to ruin a story that didn’t need any drama… once again the author won’t understand why people dislike the direction the story is taking, even though it’s obvious…
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:41 by:   nightstar2333    PM
Score +12
??作者要来戏了吗
Posted on 20 November 2025, 15:55 by:   Zaiup    PM
Score +196
I'll never understand what's inside the head of a hentai artist
Posted on 20 November 2025, 16:03 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +297
lmao the author really knew that this surprise ntr piece would get him into a trouble so he put a time reset at the very end.
Posted on 20 November 2025, 16:17 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +78
@Wilfriback Even with the time reset or going back to the past, what’s done is done lol.3 ch for nothing

The author will probably just face some backlash… whether it demotivates him or not, idk but from the reader’s side, why trust this kind of author?

Imo netorare itself isn’t bad (it’s the authors who are but it’s a genre you can’t really mix with others because it’s like an unstoppable virus. Or the author has to be really good … which isn’t the case for many authors like here
Posted on 20 November 2025, 16:35 by:   kkFhvRhV    PM
Score +52
这作者想两头吃啊,这话黑皮女被牛回去了,然后又搞个穿越线想让男主回去黑皮大学时期草黑皮女?

作者想两头吃?这话黑皮女被黄毛牛回去了,然后准备下一话让男主穿越到黑皮大学时期草黑皮女?
Posted on 20 November 2025, 16:38 by:   yangrol    PM
Score +36
我在看一种很新的东西
Posted on 20 November 2025, 17:11 by:   6216040as    PM
Score +129
火了之后这jb作者有自己想表达的东西了,他自己推里说有想表达的东西,jb东西
Posted on 20 November 2025, 17:37 by:   Karen37    PM
Score +45
哦我tm知道了,男主知道黑皮不和他做了之后直接穿越回大学时代代替黄毛日黑皮让黑皮失去被日的过去。最后不会他妈男主和黑皮结婚了吧,然后女主被遗弃。神了
Posted on 20 November 2025, 17:45 by:   baadar    PM
Score +54
Huh... Went as expected which isn't surprising when a character with that look comes up... but that turn at the end kind of makes me wonder what nonsense will the author try to pull... Maybe a reverse-NTR where now that he seemingly is in the past, he'll cuck the other dude to ensure she'd have no attachment in the future? I mean, technically this all started with MC cheating on his wife (?), so boss now trying to call it to an end for another old crush isn't that insane but... Hentai authors, pulling crazy out of pocket stuff since the very beginning xD
Posted on 20 November 2025, 19:27 by:   ironcyborg86    PM
Score +130
I saw the events of this part coming from a mile away, and yet I'm somehow still disappointed. Further more, this just leaves more questions than answers. Why include the ntr subplot if it would ultimately be 'erased' anyway? Is the MC still with his wife? Did the last three parts mean anything at all? Stuff like this is why I don't typically invest myself within doujin plots, they're all too nonsensical to take seriously.
Posted on 20 November 2025, 22:02 by:   white809    PM
Score +26
WTF ????
Posted on 20 November 2025, 22:52 by:   liumangx    PM
Score +22
直接把黑皮女收不行了吗,非得整这种狗屎烂活,两边不讨好,我看这作者脑子也是被黄毛几把查坏了,想出这种狗屎剧情,真是给我整吐了md
Posted on 20 November 2025, 23:25 by:   6216040as    PM
Score +12
你在说什么鬼话?和黑皮happy了3本后给我蹦出来了个前男友,这能不骂?要么一开始就有要么就别画,这第四本跟网文送女有什么区别。这个byd还搞“诶我们三人行,骗你的其实是送女,又上当啦其实是纯爱”这jb烂活中的烂
Posted on 21 November 2025, 00:31 by:   kampfer91    PM
Score +25
And somehow time travel out of nowhere which break the pace of story .
Posted on 21 November 2025, 01:06 by:   acrsplatt    PM
Score +23
靠没什么废话的肉戏火,然后有了自己的想法开始编离谱故事,隔壁那个辣妹看漫画也有这苗头
Posted on 21 November 2025, 01:36 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +59
@MinatoKageaki 别总觉得自己比别人聪明,无意冒犯。

这个同人本本来就是给那些想看“一个男人加两个女人”,类似小后宫或三角关系的人看的。既然前提是这样,那读者的批评本来就是完全正当的。

别再拿什么“双标”的说法出来了……
如果我想看女人背叛男主的剧情,我自然会去找以这个为主题的作品。
而不是去看这种本来是小后宫设定,结果作者突然硬塞进NTR的东西。
Posted on 21 November 2025, 01:46 by:   amulox    PM
Score +21
大概看懂了,因为黄毛的介入,黑皮选择了离开男主,但是男主穿越到黑皮大学时期,从初始直接修改黑皮记忆,彻底变成纯爱,但是我很担心作者会不会二度犯病把男主原配变成黄毛的女友,形成宿命的ntr。
Posted on 21 November 2025, 01:50 by:   SpiritSoloist    PM
Score +37
艹加戏了,整一个迫害位前男友不行吗?一转想写剧情,难道这些画师不清楚故事是看全文???强硬着开始一段与整体不太兼容的剧情怎么可能不会有问题,而且还tm是连载作品,和搞事断更狗有什么区别。
就想上深度这一点,没准女友后续还真可能和黄毛一对。
Posted on 21 November 2025, 02:49 by:   JiaoCui    PM
Score +28
我感觉以这作者的脑容量,应该想不到蝴蝶效应这个概念
Posted on 21 November 2025, 07:56 by:   zjl2025422    PM
Score +14
这剧情是何意味?
Posted on 21 November 2025, 08:59 by:   Nowseeme    PM
Score +13
转生到异世界了是吧
Posted on 21 November 2025, 12:01 by:   SpiritSoloist    PM
Score +12
?什么意思,ntr本给一堆苦主视角和描写看不到?这部逆ntr给女苦主什么塑造看不到?真以为这部逆ntr前三部对标的是正常ntr本?前两部女苦主有什么塑造?有什么镜头?第三部是往什么方向走?
前三部一个整体对标的是后宫走向,前两部对标的也不是如今“正常”ntr本,主镜头与代入感往苦主塑造和描写才是如今“正常”ntr本,只有无脑撸ntr本才是这样画的,甚至这年头无脑撸ntr本也tm给几个镜头往苦主带入,这本甚至都没有这个要素。
ntr本被强制带入苦主感受憋屈是看客的问题?光是这问题在ntr本就吵好几年了。
这本真对标的也是女性向后宫作品,女主家里有男友后宫一号,结果黄毛男二诱惑女主出轨,到第三部男友和黄毛一起干女主成为女主后宫,第四部则是黄毛前女友来公司结果把后宫黄毛夺走了,这不一样要挨骂?难不成女性向后宫正常走向是女主后宫被夺走是频繁的正常桥段?那女性向市场🐮b,我tm看一辈子后宫,看一辈子绿帽癖m玩法,两个xp真加起来强制带入苦主,真搞事起来我也是受不了的。
同时逆ntr迫害女苦主的本子照样会挨骂,而且男性带入逆ntr本来就更容易带入做爱男方视角,ntr本看母猪堕落不也是看女方视角,大部分情况谁骂过肉戏部分。
真完全带入ntr本女方视角看黄毛跑了那不也是要骂?苦主都扔了黄毛结果又跑了,这种沙币感觉除了享受极端m玩法,谁喜欢啊。
别把漫画作者强带入视角倾向和看客潜意识优先带入视角原则问题当不存在。
而且真带入这第四本女方视角,老子前脚跟和看上的男人(大屁股下属)好上,后脚跟突然又回到前男友(巨乳学姐)怀抱,nm我到底要干什么?我看着也不能双收,最后整个本子里又强制带入男主,又要我带入丢掉的男主看他大学艹我,故事简直乱七八糟。
整这么一出就算从故事性上不想有争议是不可能的,除非一转女主双收女性向后宫,但nm转女性向后宫不更炸裂?不过作者真这么玩哪怕我能接受,我tm不也是要在这里受到搞事断章的影响?
要是后续一转女主收后宫其他人怎么评价?目前从逆ntr>后宫>ntr不骂?它要是真敢最后一转女主开后宫带着男主女友4p我给个🐮b评价好吧,活给我拉满了,但目前这走向除了乐子人和不关心的心态谁能绷得住啊。
Posted on 21 November 2025, 12:17 by:   Yefta    PM
Score +76
See folks, this is why any hentai manga/Doujins artist at least need some ghost writers as a consultant to assist them with their works, specially when they're planning to make stories with a lot of chapters. I think the artist want to convey about "Cheating is bad" stuff like that and we should probably move on since I got this gyaru-oh now. But the problem is that the Mc own wife don't mind the Mc with the gyaru and infact join them, making the author message Obsolete. 😐
Posted on 21 November 2025, 13:01 by:   jim8596    PM
Score +23
主角傳送回大學時代去肛黃毛男
Posted on 21 November 2025, 13:17 by:   chechneck    PM
Score +43
They really made a NTR chapter, just to make the MC time travel back to redo it all. "Have your cake and eat it too" ahh author.
Posted on 21 November 2025, 14:14 by:   SpiritSoloist    PM
Score +14
代入各种视角有不同观感有什么问题吗?
故事是写出来的,任何细节包含展示逻辑,软强制被带入各种视角感受各种感觉本身就是故事的作用。
为什么会往各种想法思考又不是个人思维单纯的选择,故事会影响和引导思考。
别太过分了,被带入憋屈方感受的司马感受不是作者引导的?只怪看客?怎么不思考作者刻意引导这个问题?
在非色情故事里观看血腥残暴的故事和向往和平的故事,被作者引导接受故事,享受故事,思考故事,就盯着看客因为故事走向偏离自己预期开骂批评?然后批评居然喜爱血腥残暴的故事,简直就是畜牲?怎么就看不见别人也喜欢向往和平的故事?
批评看客好玩吗?你要是享受这种感受喜欢发出这种想法,那没问题,别人发出自己的想法又有什么问题?你批评看客,看客批评故事,都在享受自己的爽,想争高低是为了什么?
自己照照镜子,自己是不是也是自己指责的自私,你的目的是不是指责别人?别把自己都骗了,你要是真觉得别人看故事双标或者自私,那么好好的从故事分析和创作角度思考和阐述事情进行讨论,如果不是,就别天天在那指着别人有问题,除了享受道德制高点的爽我都不清楚你的目的会是什么,总不可能是为了表示女性出轨或者有对象时寻找另爱无罪吧。
Posted on 21 November 2025, 15:07 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +56
@MinatoKageaki 你这不是在回答别人,其实是在自己打自己脸……
读者一开始来看的,本来就是「逆出轨」+「小后宫」这种东西。别再搞什么男女对立的战争了。

我再说一遍,如果我想看的是女主去找别的男人的故事,我早就去看那种以「女方出轨」为主题的作品了。

就像你去餐厅点菜一样,你当然希望端上来的,就是菜单上写的那道菜吧?
现在想象一下,你拿到的菜和你点的完全不一样,你是会抱怨,还是因为“好歹也是食物”就硬吃下去?
这里也是一样,读者根本不在乎你说的什么「男人出轨就是爽,女人出轨就是脏」这种理论……
重点只是:这根本不是这部作品一开始的主题。

你在别的帖子里说别人“自私”……兄弟,先去搞懂什么叫“题材”和“受众”吧。
作者不能前几本写一种东西,后面突然乱加完全不相关的设定,然后还指望读者无条件接受 —— 就因为他们一开始接受了这部作品?

总有一些人,非要别人什么都接受,不然在他们眼里就是“双标”……
Posted on 21 November 2025, 15:44 by:   zprlp    PM
Score +36
前面的三话就是散到💩上的糖粉,给我干吐了,这作者脑子就是一坨答辩
Posted on 21 November 2025, 19:11 by:   xxzlove    PM
Score +17
神人作者,怕不是第四部男主穿越成功改写辣妹成自己女友,原来的女友变成黑皮黄毛的了
Posted on 23 November 2025, 00:52 by:   DLEBOY    PM
Score +14
原来是个吊都可以
Posted on 23 November 2025, 04:49 by:   cangqiongsong    PM
Score +19
来吧哈耶克,我骄傲的大手
Posted on 23 November 2025, 07:42 by:   B·Gyu    PM
Score +35
前面那个长篇大论的m开头的某人式,客观评价NTR站在社会公共道德角度倒是没有问题,但是你是不是性别叙事入脑了啊,这跟双标什么关系,明明是脑瘫展开让人感觉何意味所以才骂的啊;而且这当然跟受众有关系,因为这部从一开始就不是什么让人思考的NTR扭曲剧情作,大家之前都是乐呵的满足性癖,现在搞低水平喂屎你闻着味就出来搞道德批判了是吧,怎么不见你去女频那边战斗啊,是因为人家只会拿你这种串当路边吗;还有你说的标签真是给我整笑了,你自己相信第一部的时候作者想到这一部了吗,明明就是NTR这个标签更有受众才加上去的吧。
Posted on 26 November 2025, 06:52 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +27
@bluezia Well, mission accomplished for you maybe, for him idk … The author received very few positive reviews across all his platforms.. a lot.. a loooot of negative reviews and on his social media (X, Pixiv) he even posted this in three languages Japanese, Chinese, and English:
‘Thanks to everyone who read ep4. I’ve seen all your comments and I know this turn is divisive. This series is 5 parts, with the next as the finale—I’ll see it through in my own way, and I’d be happy if you stay with it to the end.’

It feels like a half-admission of defeat… Like he understood he fucked up, so he’s going to wrap it up before damaging his image any further…

Sales, from what someone said, weren’t very good either compared to the first three volumes, so yeah… personally, even if he doesn’t at least double or triple the page count, it’s going to be rushed and end up with a disappointing ending anyway.

He also said that on Pixiv “This story is structured in five chapters, and for now, the next one will be the final chapter.
The release will probably be around the beginning of next year, but I’d like to see it through to the end.
If possible, I’d be happy if you could stay with it until the conclusion.”
Posted on 28 November 2025, 01:19 by:   kirpus02    PM
Score +44
This story is truly STUPID. In the end, it definitely becomes CUKEO, but nooooo!! The IMBECILE author had the idea to GO BACK to the past and show the GAL's TRUE LOVE, because "remember" that at the BEGINNING they were partners for a long time, and with that, it will be revealed if fate will truly change...

I don't know if he'll continue, because honestly, for me, IT'S COMPLETE CRAP.

There is absolutely NO FORGIVENESS, because all it takes is REMOVING the harem for a DOUCHE, and it ends up "killing" the story.

It's a shame that this SHOULDN'T HAVE INCLUDED a DOUCHE, and I said very clearly that at any moment this PATHETIC AUTHOR COULD DESTROY THE STORY.

Anyway... does he think that by GOING BACK to the past the character ELIMINATES everything that CUKEO..... PLEASE!! BE REALISTIC, YOU IMBECILE AUTHOR!!

SPA:

En verdad es algo ESTUPIDO esta historia, al final se convierte en CUKEO DEFIINITIVAMENTE, pero nooooo!! el IMBECIL del autor tuvo la idea de REGRESAR al pasado al personaje y ver el VERDADERO AMOR de la GAL, porque "acuerdanse" que al INICIO eran compañeros desde hace tiempo, y con eso se dara si realmente cambiara el destino...

No se si seguira cual en verdad para mi ES UNA MIERDA COMPLETA.

En si "NO HAY PERDON ABSOLUTA", porque basta que se haga en QUITAR al harem por un DOUCHE, termina "matandola" la historia.

Que pena que esto NO DEBIO PONER a un DOUCHE, y dije bien claro que en cualquier momento LO PODRIA DESTRUIR LA HISTORIA este PATETICO AUTOR.

En fin... cree que con que REGRESAR al pasado el personaje ELIMINA todo lo que CUKEO..... POR FAVOR!! SE REALISTA AUTOR IMBECIL!!

JAP:

この物語は本当に馬鹿げている。最後は間違いなくクソみたいな展開になるのに、まさか!この愚かな作者は、過去に戻って女の子の真実の愛を描こうとした。だって、最初から二人は長い間パートナーだったことを「思い出して」、そうすれば運命が本当に変わるかどうかが明らかになるんだから…

彼が続けるかどうかは分からない。正直言って、私にとっては完全にクソだ。

許しの心は全くない。ハーレムをクソ野郎のために削除するだけで、物語が「台無し」になってしまう。

この物語にクソ野郎を入れるべきじゃなかったなんて残念だ。この情けない作者はいつでも物語を台無しにできるって、はっきり言ったのに。

とにかく...彼は、過去に戻ることでキャラクターがCUKEOのものをすべて排除できると考えているのでしょうか... お願いします!! 現実的になってください、この愚かな著者!!
Posted on 29 November 2025, 05:43 by:   gradius    PM
Score +51
This doesn't make sense anymore. This story should have ended in the second or maybe the third chapter.
It's like the author has run out of ideas for how to end it or doesn't have any other original work to do.
Disappointing.
Posted on 29 November 2025, 05:47 by:   Senpai SAP    PM
Score +30
@Kcjpunk_012 well that’s confirm what I heard about the sales.. it’s not good

Most of the sales happen when the work is first released. It’s not suddenly going to triple a year later because of a promotion.

If the work barely reaches 3k, it’s never going to get close to the other volumes.

And sure, we can nitpick about X or Pixiv users being ‘illegal consumers’ but the author reacted to their feedback…

The truth is, those platforms are also one of the best ways to communicate directly with the author, accounts he manages himself, without intermediaries
Posted on 15 December 2025, 20:58 by:   Hentai0hat    PM
Score +24
Wtf is up with every multi-work series having some NTR shoved into it as of late. Jezus christ.
Posted on 22 December 2025, 04:54 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +14
Cheap ass plot force NTR.

Nakamo got gut to do NTR surprise but not enough so they just fucking time travel out of nowhere to prevent it lol, it's ridiculous.
Posted on 29 January 2026, 10:14 by:   pikakuku    PM
Score +12
어휴 지랄났다 병신 NTR작가새키들

본인들 금태양 양아치 좋아하는거 티내지말라고 ㅅㅂ새키들아

그냥 금태양이 좋으면, 자캐만들어서 금태양이랑 게이섹스하는 자캐딸 만화나 쳐그려 ㅅㅂ새키야

NTR만 하면, 금태양 자동복붙이야 ㅅㅂ

아니면, 그냥 금태양 벗은몸 그려놓고 팔아 개새키야 걸러내기 쉽게

이래도 NTR이 쓰레기가 아니냐? NTR만 붙으면 만화자체가 쓰레기가 돼

이제 다들 인정을 해라 NTR은 쓰레기야 만화시장에서 퇴출되어야하는 쓰레기장르
Posted on 29 January 2026, 11:43 by:   wenshilong    PM
Score +6
傻逼作者没活硬正,以后都拉黑!
Posted on 29 January 2026, 19:34 by:   丶浅噬    PM
Score +11
@MinatoKageaki 你真的他媽是一個人賤種,講的話也像個他媽的弱智,男性向作品我不帶入男主開後宮我跟你一樣代入苦主視角?你喜歡體諒女主就滾去看女性向,別人好好跟你解釋還在這死鴨子嘴硬
Posted on 22 March 2026, 11:17 by:   grazeb    PM
Score +7
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