Hey everyone! My transformation comic "Mr. Norman", is here!

It's been available on my Patreon for a while, where you can get access to its PDF version as well as my new currently serializing comic for a very low pledge. I know that promotion is usually not seen well on this website, but these comics are really expensive and very time consuming to make, and I couldn't afford to do it if people didn't help me out a little.
Just know that even if you can't contribute and plan to read them over here whenever they get realeased for free, I'm still very grateful for the support!

So, if you would like to contribute, here's my Patreon:
https://www.patreon.com/c/DoloTFs

This is what your writing looks like when you only ever read manga instead of real books.

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lol yeah. the storytelling here is really rough.

you introduce mr. carlson at the end without any prior introduction. you should have introduced him at the start. is he a friend of normans? do they dislike each other? what is Carlsons relationship with the students? are they giving him a gf as a present, or is setting him up to have an affair with a student a trap for him as well?

occult class is a thing? the students vanish from the story. a followup with them and bri should have occurred. bri going basic cheerleader. did the spellcasting effect them? those runes imply yes. Bri being a mean girl and bullying them directly would have been funny.

random bathroom girl is ok. but that could have been one of the girls that transformed him.

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