Whoever did this TL needs to be dragged behind a truck for a couple miles

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For fuck's sake it's a god awful MTL. Of course. Can we get a reupload from a better version, anyone?

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The fuck does 'gulin' mean

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This is easily one of the worst MTLs I've ever seen. Clearly done by an ESL person (more likely someone who doesn't speak English at all - zero corrections on anything).

Why do ESL people do MTLs into English? Why don't they just MTL into their own damn language and leave english alone?

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Why ruin a perfectly good tall tomboy story?

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Calm down we're not all math nerds

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This shit is unreadable

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what year are you in OP? there is MTL, then there is what you posted. MTL has always been shit, but what you have reads like its from pre-AI google translate. i didnt know they still made tools this bad

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I still do not understand the point of uploading this shit. If I wanted MTL slop, I would do it myself, not rely on an idiot. And I would get better results, because this is even worse than the usual MTL slop.

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I hate having to join on comments like this, but I really wished this was not translated. it was not grammar done, the wording is not in the bubbles, and it didn't feel like it was pre check any of it before upload. I like that your trying but I would rather wait til a know translator or just look at it than try to make since of wording, and stuff.

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the Curse of a highly wanted translation for a ntr doujin being MTL

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Damn. You just committed a crime against a cancer patient bro.

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>For fuck's sake it's a god awful MTL. Of course. Can we get a reupload from a better version, anyone? ?

I will, im tired of the MTL slop and will fix these goated arts being ruined by impatient fucks.
i do not understand what is the hurry in translating this story with ai and publishing it, might as well google lens it and use that as panels

can someone give me a rundown of the first part of this story?

I will be translating https://e-hentai.org/g/3653095/60e7b3fb41/ and this one in the coming weeks and will try to publish them as soon as possible.

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It's somewhat not bad at least the guy decided to end the relationship instead of trying to make it work. It's rare to see this type of thing coming from Marushin. Which is saying something coming from me, cause normally I hate some of Marushin's work, always relying on the same ntr slop idea over and over again. I'm fine with ntr as long as the story is good, but a lot of the time it's not.

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@iamflash02

TL:DR
Short guy got confessed to by the tall volleyball girl
They date and fuck not knowing the tall senior good for nothing rich kid who bullies his juniors saw them(this is the most bullshit setting i've known in ntr it always starts with this)
Senior already has a thing for the girl but can't find a weakness and just got one
Senior confronts the girl the short guy seems to be in the school as a scholar for sports so he black mails the girl for sex unless the guy might get kicked for having sex at school or some shit
Girl gets fucked and senior is packing and girls brain basically melts because now she feels like an actual girl being fucked by an actual larger male
Girl ends up having sex with the senior multiple times never telling her bf what happened like an idiot... well she was already an idiot for falling for it in the first place Marushin never gave the women he draws higher than room temperature IQ.
By the end of the chapter Senior talks to his friends about the girl and he tells them he already got her or something.

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The first half felt a bit different from the usual stuff in this genre, like it might go somewhere new.
But nah, turns out it’s the same old formula in the end.
I get it, it’s NTR, that’s how it goes. But still…
If there was some twist where the MC somehow turned the tables and gave her something that guy never could, makes him taste failure for once, that’d be way more interesting.

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Even ichigo reader can do mtl properly, this mtl is so ass

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Holy shit reading this was like seeing a bunch of monkeys throwing words together to see if it make sense.

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Dogshit MTL aside, the biggest twist in this NTR story is the "victim" dumping the bitch ice cold and walking out and not taking the bait with her apology and crying. She still loves him and wanted to suck his dick after he watched her get railed by a different dude. The author could have done a better job of depicting her as having hope that he would forgive her and her relationship with him would survive and then being utterly crushed at him walking out. That would have been great to see.

It's rare for an NTR author to directly depict the dude being like "nah fuck this" and just dumping the woman cold with almost no hesitation and moving on immediately.

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Besides the translation being bad, it's funny how some people say this hentai is terrible just because the MC had the balls to dump his cheating girlfriend instead of trying to make things work out. Since this marushin we're talking about the same guy who will make a hentai about a guy having his girlfriend or crush get stolen away from him and 2 things will happen either the girl will marry the guy who blackmailed her or the girl will continue to cheat on her boyfriend with the blackmailer and the boyfriend doesn't know what's happening. At least Marushin tried doing something different. Ntr slop people can never be pleased.

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