Feedback ok. Of course, this is a matter of personal taste. I like breast milk, milking breasts, etc. The women's faces could perhaps be more expressive, such as rolling their eyes, blushing, feeling ashamed, crying, or even enjoying what is happening. When they have orgasms, you can use ahegao, ikigao, or yogarigao. i follow you on pixiv :) Looking forward to more pictures from you^^
@OppaiLove1987, I appreciate the feedback. I saw your follow, thank you! There could definitely be more variety in the expressions, I think I was too focused on composition and neglected that. I haven't tried using breast milk/milking yet, I'll see if I can work that into a future gallery.
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Thanks for the compliment! I think many agree with you, this was my most viewed/bookmarked pixiv post so far. I started a new job recently that is very demanding, and so I don't have as much time for content. I want to create works that I enjoy and that others enjoy as well, the feedback helps me to make the most of the time I have for creating.