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All of charaters are +18

"All of charaters are +18"

Yet they're in a school, wearing middle school uniforms. That's some kinky foreplay.

Base +8, albertzeb +6, Kaineta -5, babykataboy -6, DeltaX +11, NewhalfIsMale +11, Skvirrel +7, infernov4 +6, W1slicer +6, xw1as +10

Good start. Though please throw the text through a spelling checker or have someone pr it. Some sentences sound unnatural.

Base +6, Skvirrel -7, nikos3194 +20

Garbage typesetting. Little character consistency. Mediocre story.
You should get good before shilling for money.

Base +6, Skvirrel +7, Issei2015 -8, omegapower -10, Blublab123 +6, infernov4 +6, masterzelda123 +7, Mermaiden +6, rowaasr13 +7

not too shabby :)

Base +7, Skvirrel -7, masterzelda123 -7, Mermaiden -6, Trial~Geiz +2, rowaasr13 -7

this is not gender bender, just crossdressing, please fix the tags

Base +7, Issei2015 -8, TheBindingOfMahiro -5, insertd +6, wulup -5, Mermaiden -6, Gorm -7, Shepg +6, W1slicer -6, Trial~Geiz -2, 7 of 69 +5, Jazzy81 +11

Gyaru antagonist: "I hate guys that act tough"

Me: What did the MC do to validate your claim?

Me: *to the author* Show not tell.

Base +6