Coming back around to revisit my first translation which was very rough and best guesses in a few places after a very, very long time to re-translate it with slightly better amateur skill, better available resources, and to redo the typesetting with a better font.

我还是头一次见这个系列的角色出本

Base +6

Still a pretty bad translation

Base +10, Aldaeus -7, adoggo -15

Been one of my favorites for years. Your original translation did the trick back then. Appreciate the touch-up, though there were parts of the original I preferred.

Base +7, Aldaeus +7