RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/3194169/7a2e53503f/

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That's one well developed 6 year old. Damn MTL slop.

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The exorcist... won?

They got their personality excreted and they still won?

For this outrage, deep within his goon cave, Fan no Hitori spontaneously combusts in disgust.

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Page 4: They aren't 6 years old. The original had a circle before the 6 to represent redacted. Likely for ambiguity for legal reasons.

Base +9, LostWord -6, Alphasekai +6, baneonplane +9, Laurimoz +7

You would be correct It looks like I'm going to have to do a better job When i proof these for the future thanks for pointing it out. But AI Translations aren't Known for being the best. But i will keep a better Eye going forward

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For once in a frickin while, the villain lost :D
And actually got their power used against themselves!
Nnnnice

Base +6

I normaly don't complain about typseting or translation quality as I want to encourage people to improve. Some folks here can be way too harsh for my tastes. Despite this, my dude what in gods name have you done?

Why is the text crawling away like it owes somone money? I feel like I am pointing a magnfyimg glass at some ants and they are trying to crawl away under sone rock. Reading this legit hurt my eyes from straining them.

Plus this was not even an honest effort, you used MTL and did not even bother with proofreading?

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"Posted on 05 December 2025, 18:51 by: rantash
RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/3194169/7a2e53503f/"; <---Chinese TL

Why didn't you at least use the *actual* Japanese raw for this MTL?
https://e-hentai.org/g/3175407/7653359b3f/

Pages like these show obvious Chinese TL sources in the dialogue,
which is probably why the ENG-JP MTL failed to properly translate them.
https://e-hentai.org/s/d9317b5fcc/3670651-5
https://e-hentai.org/s/f55f3653c5/3670651-7
https://e-hentai.org/s/6465d76c35/3670651-21
https://e-hentai.org/s/c6ee8df743/3670651-26

Base +37, zunknownz +7, jaredh72 +10

These were only my first attempts and i am still learning. I Just learned that the Jap versions are the ones you want to use for the translations.. instead of just grabbing and going. it was a mistake and i will be rectifying it in the future. I do appreciate the feed back it helps me learn and understand that there are differences in the actual source material.

neonredkill
I agree i should have done a better job. Its a learning curve and i forgot to proof all 4 of the ones i put up on here. moving forward i will have to be more diligent. that aside any feed back you have may be use for to me please dont hesitate to let me know.

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Putting aside the translation quality, the typesetting in this was truly egregious. At the very bare minimum you have to make sure the text is readable, but that didn’t happen here. Do better.

Base +11, plst +7, zunknownz +7

If you're gonna use MTL, please at least have the decency to put it in the title so people can avoid it, dude.

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