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Translation with MTL + dumb plot.. My review is inevitably going to be salty

Another plot… huh netorare, okay lets read that… I’m ready for the no sense !

MC is infertile… okay check. His dick is small.. huh check.. He still wants to have a child but wants it to stay in the family… hmm idk but why not.. check… so he calls his brother (???) and instead of just putting the sperm in a vial, the brother wants to sleep directly with the MC’s wife… lmao but check

Shit could stop here and just make that one time and move on but no 67 pages of no sense lol… He takes out his dick and ejaculates outside on purpose the first time. Why the fuck, he make her suck and ejaculates in her mouth.. she’s dumb or what ?? She thinks she can make babies by swallowing sperm ? and then he tells her they need to have sex at least 10 times to be sure.. MC and FMC acts like kids who don’t know how make kids..

alright.. okay okay maybe I’m upset and not objective.. sex doesn’t make sense… probably the rest is okay ? Huh no ?? The plot pushes stupidity so far that she doesn’t even change the sheets… do they only have one set of sheets or what?

I’m going to stop here… there’s no point talking about the scene where MC comes home early and sees what he caused by agreeing to let his brother fuck with his wife… then in the final scene, instead of punching him and telling him to get out of his house, he just has a breakdown when his brother says ‘my baby’ and MC replies ‘no, it’s my baby’ No, it’s not your baby, and stfu… authors need to stop making pussy MC

.. I wasn’t ready for the no sense

Anyway… the art is good but not great. The style is very similar to Araama imo and I think the characters, whether it’s FMC or the bastard brother, look a lot like the ones from that series: https://e-hentai.org/g/3545225/e07f05e6e8/

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My NTR isn't written like a posr modern 1800 literature masterpiece, despite knowing is mostly one of the most overused plots for porn everywhere? How do they DARE?!

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The cover is nightmare fuel, work was MTL'd and the content is just your average NTR slop I couldn't think of a worse combo

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Even as an English-only speaker I can tell that the translation sucks.

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The Translation is the same quality as the art.

Take a look at Senpai SAP's review, it's quite accurate. Personally I like NTR but I like it to make at least a little sense! This is just pathetic.

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