Don't worry too much about this being in the middle of a long series, the issues are mostly pretty disconnected from each other.
This is the first doujin translation that I've finished. Previously I had started translations on some larger things and then never finished, so this time I decided to be sensible and do something I could finish reasonably quickly. Suisei's dialogue is translated pretty directly, but the phrasing that the robot uses is tweaked slightly, since in the original the tone he speaks in pretty based in Japanese politeness, which doesn't translate at all. Translating sound effects is also pretty hard, ordinarily I don't think I would bother, but this had translation blanks available which already had the sound effect text removed. It looked a little blank without them so I did my best, a few had to be omitted since they really don't have good English equivalents.
I think I'll do aqsitw 20 too, since it follows on directly from this and it's also pretty short