Up to page 24 I tried to stay as close to the original as possible. After that, I made some changes and added lines to make the story work together.

CREDITS:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3054967/ffac54037a/
https://e-hentai.org/g/2898761/501a6c3d5c/

page 31:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3282834/cc8d18add1/
page 32:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3409416/e73a568411/
page 38:
https://bo-vs-mary.fanbox.cc/posts/9561515/

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English rewrite, You are here!

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This should be labeled as a rewrite in the title, then.

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Why do a rewrite if we don't have an original English translation? Also, what changes were made?
Was looking forward to this one since Kay and Darjeeling are love.

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@Shimapanshot The text is practically the same up to page 24. I didn’t want to include it as a translation because I can’t translate it exactly. The sequel is partially rewhite, not completely, the changes were mostly in order to fit them in.

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So what was changed, and why couldn't the original be translated normally? Just wondering if the entire arc was changed or something. Thanks in advance.

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Nobody draws clothed pregnancies. Sucks

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