This is a combination of the above, but that's not all, as I have also fixed a few typos (sqish -> squish on page 18, read -> reach on page 20, etc.), restructured a couple of sentences to avoid word repetitions within them, and some other minor stuff that was bothering me, like adding the hearts present in the Japanese source but not in the Digital or moving them to where the translated sentence is instead of leaving them where the Japanese text was. Some of the pages were torn along the edges (scanning leftovers, I guess), so I fixed that too.
Should be nearly perfect now. My only gripe is that my Japanese and editing skills are not good enough to make this the definitive version by also translating the onomatopoeia. Also, although Doujins.com should be a reputable translation, there are a few sentences that sound a bit weird but that I couldn't fix due to what I just mentioned. Oh well.
Lastly, if I recall correctly, not all of the stories of the decensored tankoubon are translated to English, so I'm not sure who and when might do the full tank.
Doujins.com isn't a reputable translation at all. While they do have some well made translations from the past, most of their work isn't. It's very common that their translation simply sucks, even for the works that they put behind their fucked up paywall. It's ridiculous.
As for the rest, Doujins.com is mostly reposting other pirated translator works (mostly with missing author-credit pages, sometimes missing back cover pages, mostly missing updates from the original uploader that they ripped it from e.g. sadpanda and last but not least sometimes with the preview images instead of the original archives just like other rip-off sites) on their website behind a paywall.
Also it is worth mentioning that they often mess up the colour format of their own works, by converting images into other container formats than the original, or changing format settings (and they do it even with the (mostly untranslated) front and back cover pages as well) not just extremely bloating file size but also heavily reducing image quality. It is a very rare occasion to see them do it correctly, which is very ironic because, as I have mentioned before, they put some of their works as well as other pirated works, even behind a ridiculous paywall (they aren't even licensed, all their works is pirated content).
The site has been criticized a lot due to those reasons, and probably even for more red flags than just what I have mentioned, but the site owner is basically an ignorant fuck, because he still has fucktards who keep paying him monthly.
As ridiculous as it is already, it is likely that they may put YOUR decensor edit behind their paywall in a couple of days or weeks. Just wait and see, once they repost it on their site. It's a 50/50 chance, they randomly pick what to put behind their fucking paywall.
Anyway, thanks for your decensor edit! (These were a lot of words just to say thank you, lol)