translated by biribiri biribiri.cc
2nd version, I guess.

RapidBlast: Did you read that as a follow-up from the earlier box, where the sentence starts?

Thank you!

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English 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/3680038/5e18afc0ee/

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Will you translate part 3? I really enjoyed your translation of Hatsukoi no Hito.

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biribiri's translation seems a little bit off in this one. The other translation from Fallen Games is better if you ask me.

e.g. Page 2:
"At Yoshino-san's, my relatives who live out in the sticks. It's already been a week..."
This sentence doesn't make sense in English grammar. "who live out in the sticks" is a separate line that needs a follow-up. "my relatives-" what? You need a follow-up there without finishing the sentence with the period.

Fallen Games translated it like this:
"It's been a week since I started staying at my relative, Yoshino-san's house in the sticks." While grammar isn't perfect here, the sentence makes much more sense.

Last edited on 04 January 2026, 22:30.

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bggm: I suppose you could try adding an ellipsis before "At Yoshino-san's" next time to make that clearer.

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