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This started out as an interesting concept. The idea of what happens when someone without a voice is forced to deal with not getting to have something everyone else can just ask for. Really interesting concept.

Then it turned into a character assassination of the most interesting part of the comic. Yes, the dick-head typhlosion was, in fact, the most interesting part of the comic.
To be VERY clear; The typhlosion is only a dickhead because the writer chose to make him a dickhead. That's how narrative works. If the goal was to establish that he's a dickhead who needs his world view challenged to help him change, then the comic should not have opened with him being the PoV character who feels as though they have been wronged.

A few key things that Seriously undercut what seems to be the 'message' of this comic;
1.) The mute character gets a voice. Regardless of how, this should be a revolution of incredible merit. If it's not, what that means is that the trainer KNEW that there was a way to give him back his voice and purposefully withheld it. What this establishes is that the trainer is refusing to provide aid to overcome a disability to what is essentially his employee, with the only possible motive being that he doesn't want the typhlosion to be able to talk.

2.) Pokemon shouldn't be racist. Making a Pokemon racist is such a profound misunderstanding of racism as a concept and why it exists at all. All making a pokemon racist does is establish that the writer completely fails to understand the world view of the people he's attempting to make caricatures of. Case in point; If a pokemon is racist towards a human, why is it racist towards a BLACK human, and not ALL humans? Why is it not racist towards the other Pokemon? The ones with literal different anatomy and even type-weaknesses against it? Pokemon exist across the full spectrum of the rainbow. Why in the fuck would a pokemon give a single, solitary damn about a human having a different skin-tone than another human? That's not how racism works.

3.) What even is the trainer/pokemon dynamic in this world? Are pokemon pets, employees, family, children? They're intelligent enough to communicate, and apparently consent to sex with humans. Despite that, a charizard apparently jumped a human and started fucking it and that was just... fine? A perfectly acceptable thing that just happens?
Also, it's apparently perfectly okay for trainers to function in the normal sense - they go and lead their pokemon into battle against other trainers - but the pokemon themselves are somehow their employees? Trainers get to pick their pokemon, force them to enter pokeballs, and are responsible for them like they would be a pet... But it's entirely unreasonable for a pokemon to capture another pokemon and use it as the equivalent of a seeing-eye dog?

I would say this comic is entirely form over function, but the form isn't even good. In the background is a reasonably interesting narrative about life in the pokemon world from the perspective of an adult. However, in the foreground is a massive caricature of what the writer thinks an incel is, which they're using as a narrative punching bag. All while writing a story about an ex drug addict who tried to commit suicide for... seemingly no legitimate reason, given any pokemon trainer would have had to deal with loss and failure a lot throughout their journey to becoming a legitimate champion.
Oh, and they're also a nymphomaniac who will sleep around on their own partner yet get mad at them for cheating, yet continue to fuck them when they live in a house filled with people willing to have sex with them. All while Also engaging in beastiality with what is a combination of their pets / employees.

Also, if you're going to attempt to do a caricature of an influencer like Andrew Tate, maybe actually watch some of his work. He's a legitimately shitty enough person, you can make fun of him without just making shit up. Not only does it inform your caricature so it's more effective at demeaning him, but it also helps you better understand Why someone would fall for his schtick beyond just being seemingly delusional to a point that's entirely unbelievable.

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@Genoahia
You read my entire mind with that description.

This comic feels incomplete in 2 fronts. 1 in regards that it feels like this is a slice from an even bigger story. Yet we pick up the story from like chapter 9 in a book with 36 Chapters. The whole beginning is so outstandingly out of place with the rest of the story. We literally open up with Pokémon fucking and pounding one of the main leads of the comic. 2nd point would be the sheer drop off of a cliffhanger. Like it just ends before we move forward with the plot.

This comic has possibly a great premise, yet falls so short of hitting that greatness in creativity. Both leads are assholes in vastly different ways. Smokey being a Typholsion that evolved and lost his voice. Making him mute, with no possible ways to communicate. Thus leading him down of path of depression and a host self-harming habits. Such as keeping an ideal that Azoth is his partner. His 'woman'. It gets down to the point that he would listen to an Andrew Tate podcast, which is odd that's its Sandshrew. (Personally, it think it should have been a Smeargle or a Scrafty. Yet that is just my opinion.) Which is even more of a shame that he has to 'find his voice' by 'taking claim' over another Pokémon. Yet immediately get condemned for doing that. Was it a bad thing? Yes. It's not a good thing, yet what else do you expect for him to do since there aren't any other options that was ever given to him. Which makes me think that writer wasn't thinking about the greater implications of that. That in this Pokémon world, being mute is either a death sentence or a life of social imposed loneliness. It's also very shocking to know that Smokey just wants 1 thing. Just 1 simple thing. He just wants to sleep with Azoth. He is jealous of all the others that gets to sleep with him. Yet its even more insulting that all the others just say, 'You just have to ask'. Motherfucker, how the hell is supposed to ask? He couldn't speak until recently, he was trapped, all alone with his thoughts with what possibly could have been a few years. Even after learning that, they still have the gall to give him smack, when he's been the only that never got to sleep with Azoth. They all know this, yet never thought to ask on his behalf? I heard of being selfish, yet that is just plain spiteful ignorance.

As for the other main leads, Azoth. I don't understand how they saw sleeping with that sheer amount of Pokémon as a normal daily thing. Besides that the fact they have a vagina, that doesn't just wave away the potential sexual damage that can happen. I mean human wombs were designed with human penises in mind. No hate to the bestiality scene. Yet if you are taking cock from a Charizard, Persian, etc, there are going to different effects to your body. This leads to make me believe that Azoth isn't doing this for love or need sexual pleasure. I think this is their self-harming habit. (Something that I think that most guys would want in some forms.) Having a string of sexual encounters in the guise of love. Yes, we know that Azoth is currently married to an asshole. Yet they shouldn't be adding flames the fire by getting involved in a large polygamous relationship with all these Pokémon. If you can't love yourself, how do you expect to love others? Azoth also bare some responsibility with how Smokey turned out. They purposely led him to evolve. This evolution led to Smokey losing his voice. Yet even with knowledge, they refused to allow him to have an outlet to communicate. They forced Smokey into being a listener for their trauma. Yet they get upset when he leaves after hearing that stuff. There is only so much bullshit and trauma person/Pokémon can hear before they start to dislike you. Yet despite all of that, its a wonder to how Azoth even survived this long. We get a whole flashback with them, and yet even after surviving that, they just dive into a different vice of harm? I understand that many people that go into rehab, some will relapse. However, they are capable being supportive and helpful to others. Hell, Azoth seem to be this trainer that collects other abandoned Pokémon as some kind Fostering system. We learn that they had 2 other starters before Smokey, yet we don't learn too much about them. So it's kind of telling how Azoth may think about Starters versus the other Pokémon in their life.

Now to the side characters. Simone seems only to exist just to spite Smokey and give an air of relief to Azoth. For being a Pokémon that can bring smiles to others, he is pretty blind to seeing another of his own kind in a broken state. He attacks Smokey simply for being a slob with no plausible explanation. Simone is basically pulling a Larry from Foster's, only in this case, he is only being a jerk to slowly cascading drain of trauma. Simone just accept Azoth's side and never attempts to be neutral.

Oba, he is just introduced to be Azoth's other brother. Yet also said that Azoth is a clone of him. This is a confusing plot line that is cut off, just as quickly as it comes up. This is like 'Not Josuke' helping child Josuke in Jojo part 4.

Overall, this comic has potential. Yet I think it will need a lot of writing to fix the issues at play. I hope it will get better.

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