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This was a commission? You took money for this?
At least get a proofreader to fix all the grammar and spelling mistakes. This is embarrassing. Why do you translate into English when you don't know English?

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Mc Arisato please shut up. You are rude and very mean. Please take your anger somehwere lese. This is a sharing and we get it for free. Just learn some manners before you post here again.

As for this work, it is nicely done but frankly tho the artist is very skillful, there isn't really any story here. Hopefully the artist will improve over time. thanks for sharing this.

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Yeah shut the fuck up you rude bastard. They gave it to us for FREE! You literally have NO RIGHT to complain if something that was thrown out here FOR FREE is SHIT (subjectively, of course). If you don't like it, just dedicate days of your life to "fixing" their work for free yourself! Better yet, don't even complain because that might drive these hardworking people away from doing their hard (paid) labor and releasing it FOR FREE!

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what people dont know by commission literally someone "bought" the translation maybe its 5USD per page if it is my god money wasted, this is not being rude, the readers here are reading for free but SOMEONE WASTED THEIR MONEY

ok someone wasted 24USD if its 1USD oer page

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@BlueMoonCircle
have you ever seen the Icefrog DOTA2 meme?
if not, google it out, it's literally you.

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There's a dilemma. On one hand I support the idea of commissioning translations. Fan translations have become less of a thing as they have been in the past and it is not unreasonable to make some profit with the efforts you put on for other people. At the same time I do also support the stance that work should be done properly if you demand money for it. A lot of the mistakes in the translation give me more of a feeling that it was made in a lazy manner, yet at the same time I can somehow feel that the translator really put alot of effort into it.

Which made me conclude, that they are perhaps still fairly new to this? Correct me if I'm wrong. If that's the case: please keep at it. Mistake are what help us get better at things we enjoy doing. We can only learn from them and the experience we gather from it is invaluable.

Also regarding the dude crashing out over this: you are getting angry over the money others spent. I can respect that. But at the end of the day it's their money that was spent. If they felt happy with this translation, that's all that matters to them. So take a chill pill.

One last request to the uploader: I put a petition to rename the upload to include the Comiket event it was sold at. Please always add that to the name so that navigating and finding doujins becomes easier! Much appreciated!

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Heya, I’m DeppoTL.
I didn’t expect this upload would lead to a discussion about the quality of my work, so I wanted to clarify a few things.

This was a paid commission. The client reviewed each page before upload and approved the final version, including allowing me to upload it under my name. As you might expect, English isn’t my native language. It’s something I learned through long-term exposure rather than formal, by-the-books education, and I’m aware that this often shows in my work.

If I’m accepting payment, I understand that the responsibility for quality ultimately falls on me. I take that seriously, and I’ll be improving my proofreading process and overall English accuracy in future uploads.
I’m still learning, and I appreciate any constructive feedback. I hope we can work together to help me improve along the way or if not, just simply stopping by to read, adding to favorite, or leaving a rating is much appreciated.

Please continue to look forward to my future uploads, whether they are commissions or personal works.

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So I was correct with my assumption! If that's the case then yes, continue to do your best Deppo! English isn't my native language either and I only managed to develop it by using it daily to consume media that I love and to interact with others that share these interests. I promise you, you will get better and better at this in no time. In fact, translation is how I am trying to develop my Japanese as well.

I am happy to hear that you are not taking the criticism personal. I am looking forward to seeing your progress! If there's anything I can help out with feel free to hit me up.

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Holy fuck—Rio is a completely, utterly shameless slut.
You can tell at a glance she’s the type who looks cold and aloof on the surface, but in reality has an insanely strong sex drive. Big breasts, wide hips, a fully matured, voluptuous female body, paired with an icy, high-class temperament and an absolutely gorgeous face—she’s the kind of seductive, mature woman that oozes lewd charm.
She’s wearing black pantyhose bodysuit tights, and her pussy and asshole are constantly dripping with thick, sticky, stringy nectar that gives off an enticing female scent mixed with filthy female juice.. A damp, slutty smell hangs around her. Her pussy, covered in soft, dense jet-black pubic hair, twists her panties—soaked in fluids—into a thin string that digs hard into her swollen clit. She’s slick and ready, perfect for just shoving it in and fucking her right there without even taking her clothes off.
If you find her, you can absolutely rail her hard. And after you’re done, there’s dessert—she’ll put on the bunny-girl outfit you like, wear those pink nipple covers you’ve been thinking about, and beg you to keep going. If you “open and eat immediately,” she’ll grab your balls, lick from your scrotum all the way up to your cock tip, then let you finish inside her however you want and keep fucking her from behind, pounding her ass while listening to her make filthy, debased, mature sow-like moans.
Then, in a storm of orgasmic screams, her breasts will spray milk wildly while she squirts nonstop.

The moment I saw Rio in that slutty black latex tight suit, wrapping those explosively fat, perky hips and twisting around on screen—my dick got so hard it felt like it was going to explode.
Those massive tits stuffed into the tight outfit look like they’re about to burst out. Every step she takes is fucking tempting me to commit a crime. I just want to drag her into Schale, tear that latex suit apart, and pound her hard from behind, fucking that peach-like fat ass while her long black straight hair whips around and she moans like a bitch in heat.
She keeps throwing those flirty glances and smiling—my brain just shuts down. All I want is to pin her to the ground and fuck her until she begs. This bitch is absolutely doing it on purpose, trying to steal my soul. That slim waist twists like a snake spirit—makes me want to strip her naked on the spot and fuck her until she’s rolling on the floor.
Fuck, I’m going insane. If this slut keeps swaying like that, I swear I’m going to charge forward and fuck her until her legs give out. Someone fucking stop me, or I’m really going to turn into a breeding stallion and destroy her.

Rio, this ice-cold beauty, just standing there makes my eyes go blank.
That expression like someone owes her eight million, paired with those massive breasts stretching the latex suit to its limit—she’s basically a walking hormone bomb. Every step she takes, that fat ass jiggles like jelly.
She pretends to be unapproachable, but that just makes me want to slam her against a wall, rip the tight suit open, and watch those peachy ass cheeks bounce out—see if she can still keep that cold face. My head is full of images of her being fucked until her face is flushed red, biting her lip and enduring it.
If she gives me one more shy glance, I swear I’ll turn into a beast, drag her into Schale, and fuck her until her sow-like battle cries echo all the way to the next millennium.

Wait—holy shit, isn’t this that Blue Archive character with the most porn?
The one with huge tits, tight hip-hugging skirt, black stockings, long straight black hair—the “forbidden-desire” bitch with the gap-moe contrast?
She’s such a slut. Her suit jacket wraps her breasts perfectly—round, full, and heavy. Those two massive tits sway even through thick clothing when she walks. Her black stockings shape her legs beautifully. And the key point—she always poses in ways that basically flash her crotch.
She’s one of the rare BA characters who just by looking at her makes people as aroused as seeing pussy. Dicks are exploding everywhere. The kind who acts all proper on the surface, but once the teacher fucks her, she just gets addicted—a pure student-council bitch who makes you want to fuck her every single time you see her.

How did you know that the black-haired, abstinent-looking, gap-moe bitch from Blue Archive—the one with the most porn—has fully landed in real life?
Fuck your mom, this Rio really is a slut.
Round, full breasts wrapped in a suit jacket.
Well-shaped legs wrapped in black stockings.
Always striking crotch-revealing poses.
She’s absurdly slim at the waist, yet supports a pair of breasts bigger than her head. Long, thick thighs hidden deep under heavy black pantyhose. Beneath her cold expression lies affection for the masses. She holds a tablet, pretending to be an urban intellectual, yet does tons of dumb shit.
Her deep red, seductive pupils hide a pure white ring. Her skirt is so short that if she squats, you can straight-up admire the ventilated pantyhose ass.
Call her openly slutty—nothing’s actually exposed.
Call her secretly slutty—everything important is pushed right out.
She constantly gives off the vibe of “waiting for the teacher to mate with her, but too embarrassed to say it.” Maybe this is the internal struggle of a socially isolated Kivotos old-virgin woman—face calm and composed, but her pantyhose are already stuck to her.

Honestly, Rio is just that fucking sexy.
I want to become a dick, pierce her tight suit, dive into her cleavage, and fill the inside of her outfit completely. I really can’t hold it anymore. I want to fuck every inch of her from the inside out—even if I die crushed between her tight suit and her voluptuous body, I’d die without regret.
Fuck, why is Rio so goddamn erotic?
Long black hair, red eyes, tight suit, professional demeanor—was this designed to seduce me?
I can’t take it. Why am I not in Kivotos? I want to use my dick to punch through the screen into Kivotos, shove it into her tight slutty pussy while she’s fighting Cross Divine Name, watch her struggle to stay composed while facing the enemy, then finally explode inside her.
Then she loses the battle in front of the enemy, her defeat CG spraying fluids that leak straight out through the seams of her tight suit, flooding the entire Cross Divine Name base.

If in obscure character comment sections you find true fans, and in popular character sections you find “mommy archive” and lunatics—then only in Rio’s comment section do you find sex demons who’ve been repressed for 5,000 years.
The key is that in fan works, Rio really has evolved into a big-tits, wide-hipped, black-stocking, dripping-wet poison-pen archetype. The artists and readers alike wish they could shove their dicks straight into the screen and fuck her hard, breeding her relentlessly.
Honestly?
This level of wild sexual desire will destroy Asia.

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