So Nae is totally getting her own training arc at the camp. Can't wait for that. You can really tell that Hitoi draws his daughters with such love.

Sorry this took so long. I think I was being too much of a perfectionist on minor things. I'll be working on part 2 soon; the DMM doesn't release until the end of January, so it'll be after that, so I can grab the afterword.

I've got a morbid curiosity on potentially working on the Soushuuhen too (with new translations and redrawing the covers and fixing sfx and such), but it's just a passing shower thought for now.

The back cover is a bigger resolution than the original because I was able to recreate it piece by piece, so I increased the resolution to match the cover (it's 2x resolution). Let me know if I should've kept to the original size otherwise. I spent way too much time trying to color match for something that literally doesn't matter, so I apologize if it's not perfect. I was just a bit inspired from some other people's works.

TL/TS/Cleaning: Hakua

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>I spent way too much time trying to color match for something that literally doesn't matter
This is the most editor-brained shit. You love to see it.

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Dialogue is repeated on pages 23 and 24

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It's repeated in the Raw as well, so I think the original author made the mistake lol

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The post nut clarity on shit like this always makes me think "if this was real, that girl would probably fall into depression and kill herself after enough of this treatment." It's great art though! Eh... now I'm sad...

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@SANPH like Ksintai said, the dialogue is the same in the Japanese.

@MaxwellCoffeehouse you'd think that, but she definitely enjoys it

Last edited on 10 March 2026, 02:26.

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