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Zangya and Gohan don't work together. For one, the barely so much as looked at each other in her first appearance in Bojack Unbound. And for another, even if I'm led to believe she was somehow saved or spared by Gohan, I don't by for a second she would be anything more than be in his debt. If you haven't seen Bojack Unbound recently, she was as much a ruthless and dangerous fighter as the rest of her cohorts. She kicked Krillin's ass when she first showed up and partook in kicking Gohan's ass during the battle. What really makes it hard to believe her and Gohan would ever be on good terms, much less be fuck buddies, is after Gohan goes Super Sayain 2 an kills Bido and Bujin. Zangya was rightfully terrified of what she saw and if Bojack didn't kill her, Gohan sure as shit would've without question. So really, this comic should've been about Gohan and Videl. I'd even accept Gohan reuniting with Lime from Chazke Village or Chico and Ena, 2 orphan girls from Plight Of The Children during his training in the Sayain Saga. I just can't accept Gohan and Zangya specifically being paired together when they have no real rapport to speak off. Not helping is this hideous artstyle with pale colors, goofy looking curved noses, wonky looking toes, and distractingly off colored nipples on Zangya that don't properly complement her skin color. The admittedly good posing is ruined by the bad art direction.

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