Feedback please! :)

I think I would've liked it more with a slower transformation, maybe changing first boobs and then other parts one by one? more development and not just a time skip before the final scene! :)

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Thanks for the feedback, riccoro. Yeah, you're right and I do regret the time skip. I was actually thinking today of creating a new version with no time skip so I can try to explore more curses ideas.

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It is decent, I would have two bits of feedback though. Like riccoro said, that time skip at the end felt rushed, especially considering how much time was spent before the change, it feels like you just ran out of time and had to end it but wanted to include gender shifting.

The second bit of feedback is kind of connected, which is that it feels like there isnt a cohesive theme to the story in terms of fetish. You spend 3/4 of the story about body control gay sex, then we hit 75% of the way through and now its gender shifting. The gender shifting comes off as kind of tacked on. And the actual mind control (rather than body control) all happens off screen during the time skip. So from a story standpoint, its better to either just keep it gay the whole way and lose the gender shifting entirely, or have the gender shifting be a larger % of the story than it is now so it doesnt feel rushed or tacked on.

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Thanks for the feedback, BlaiseThePhoenix . Yeah its just you like you mentioned, I kinda rushed the story and I didn't really made it clear whether the guy is straight, gay, or bisexual. It's my first NSFW comic so I guess mistakes like this was expected which is why I appreciate these feedbacks so much. I'm not sure if I should rewrite the story to make it more clear and continue the plot or maybe I should just learn from it and move on into making a new comic. Thanks for the feedback, it's helpful

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Its not bad but its rushed. A gradual transformation is always more appealing, either that or greater emphasis on commands.

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great improvement! I like it more. Personally, I would have made the transformation gradual along with the mind changes, like for every time he has an erotic thought his body becomes more and more feminine and at the end he fully becomes a woman. just an idea, what do you think?

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hey, riccoro! Glad you liked the improvement, I love your idea. It's very original and i don't think its been done before. I’ve thought about doing a gradual transformation, but it’s been used so often in comics that I’d rather go in a different direction. With this one, I want a slow-burn psychological mind break. In a lot of comic i read, the moment the transformation starts, the character suddenly becomes overly sensitive to any stimulation and sometimes their whole personality flips right away. It’s rare to find a comic that keeps the focus on character's slow-burn psychological break rather than the body changing which is why I made this comic.

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