Y’know, I get that this is supposed to be funny, maybe even “relatable,” but something about this overall presentation comes across as just plain dirty. I can’t put my finger on why exactly; maybe it’s the art style, the age difference, the fact that there’s effectively no dialogue (98% of the time it’s just the MC admonishing an older person), or maybe it’s all of the above and then some. It’s not erotic so much as it is mean-spirited.
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Hello, first of all, thank you for taking the time to read my work and for your feedback, it is very helpful to me.
I wanted to do something different with the characters' dialogue. I don't know if you've read the manga “Dogeza de Tanondemita,” where the main character doesn't speak and only the girls talk. I tried to do something similar with this comic, where only the girl speaks and the characters around her don't have any dialogue.
I like the artstyle, and the girl is very cute. I think I'm with penislord1 though, if a girl did this to me I would feel way worse. Pity is even more disheartening than rejection. I think if she was uplifting and gave the men reasons to believe in themselves I'd see the vision more.