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Posted on 19 September 2025, 01:27 by: MagicalJuko
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The typesetting is a bit wonky on KiriothLDCensored_004.jpg (page 12). The main problem is in the box "emergence of potent, non-human pheromone detected" Because of the cutoff, it separates "non" into "no n." The general rule for cutting words between lines is to go between syllables.
Posted on 19 September 2025, 01:27 by: MagicalJuko PM The typesetting is a bit wonky on KiriothLDCensored_004.jpg (page 12). The main problem is in the box "emergence of potent, non-human pheromone detected" Because of the cutoff, it separates "non" into "no n." The general rule for cutting words between lines is to go between syllables.
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks for the heads up ! I have been sloppy with this one, I need to rework the text. There is a bunch of stuff I want to improve with this story. I'll get to it eventually but for now I'm working on other stuff :)