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Finally, really loves it!

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Thanks for continuing the work !

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I feel like there would be a 5th one, there's no way they're just gonna leave it like that. It's kinda rare to see a gb magical girl corruption that isn't possesion or something similar man I need more!

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Hell yeaaaa!!

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great work thanks

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Nice overall, but disappointingly short amount of time for stuff with corrupted form of Karou. So hoping there's at least one more in this series to come.

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what is mentioned on the last page? anything about part 5?

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I liked this chapter better but the pacing still felt frantic.

@hentamon Nope, he rambles about the lack of page, how he wanted to add more brainwashing scene and how he had to cram everything together

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weres the bodyswap?

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Yay I love being right! :) This entire project was and is a joke.
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The only positive things I can say about Satou's new work is that the art is nice and some of the scenes are interesting.
I hate Karou's character, but he had a proper evil fall character arc unlike Selen. As a magical girl he ends up having sex with the monsters he's supposed to be fighting and then even turns on the people he is supposed to be saving - using them both as sexual outlets. That in terms of proper evil fall corruption is what you should expect and are very strong story elements, but it was told in a terrible rushed way and still manages to be better than Selen's story.
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The negative? LITERALLY EVERYTHING!
- Pacing is absolutely atrocious across all chapters. There is no defense. sex scenes are like 3 pages long or are vanilla NTR garbage.
- Selen's entire rushed and lack luster corruption route, her involvement for 2 laughable pages in the final volume. What was actually the point in including her for those 2 pages. Like seriously?
- Literally no new creative ideas over the course of the entire story besides the womb parasite. The brainwashing tentacle machine stuff was interesting, but was never really dug into and for anyone who likes proper corruption you already know that brainwashing is a cheat and cop-out and doesn't actually count as real corruption.
- Take a look at his previous NTR comics and you will notice like most of his work, that many of the panels and scenarios are literally the exact same. There's a page in chapter 3 where Selen is having sex with Zomer during the live stream and every single panel is an NTR trope and it's probably the worst thing I have ever seen Satou produce. He literally just drew a page with the lowest fruit on the NTR tree. Middle finger, hand holding blah blah.
- He has yet to draw colored images of the evil fall outfits which tells me that even he doesn't care about this story or characters. Love Mary had so many additional drawings, but instead of investing in his own characters and stories he's drawing stupid gatcha girls from some silly Idol phone game that he plays.

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that means maybe we will have another part in the book?

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You can't leave it like that, I need a fifth chapter. Hopefully the author will write it.

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