Page 8: "It's true that I fell asleep while on duty as a Gatekeeper, but..."
That "but..." should be removed.

Page 9: "Take them away."
Pretty sure this is just a wrong translation. Should be something more like "Speak, speak."

Page 20: "What the hell? This guy's a knight, but he just came from his nipples."
Wrong gender. I would translate こいつ to something more like "This bitch". So the full line would be "What the hell? This bitch is a knight, but she just came from her nipples."

Page 31: "Hey, wait a second! If we do that, when will it be my turn?!"
Weird phrasing. I would just remove "If we do that," and just leave it as "When will it be my turn?!"

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the knight woman is literally Ingrid from taimanin series.

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hit with the long dick of the law

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70years! Just how old is she?

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Really do like the world building of this succubus series compared to other stories.

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way better chapter compared to the previous one, we get to see a cameo of the momma too
maybe in a tankoubon we will get a page with the succubus lineup, measurements and all. And possibly less censor...

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And to no one's surprise, she became a succubus, but like... they're acting like she's the unreasonable one. Dude, you fell asleep on the job, and the noble's body was in your station. Bro can say "false accusation" all he wants, but even if he didn't do it, he has to see how bad that looks. And where'd the other knights go?

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@Hammerdev

Came here to say the exact same thing lol. Then again it makes some sense, Remu is one of the few hentai authors who draws Taimanin doujins.

This series is cool, it's like Remu wanted to make a campy and funny counterpart to Shaua's saga.

There is a typo though. On page 20, Mira (the dumb barbarian succubus) addresses not!Ingrid as "he".

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While falling asleep on the job is extreme negligence and grounds for severe punishment, possibly even execution. It is a false accusation to say the guard who slept on the job is the asassin. For one, it means no effort is being placed at all into finding the real assassin and punishing them. Letting the real assassin get off scots free. Where in fact both the sleeping guard and the assassin and the person who hired the assassin all need to be punished.

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The Mc sure could get punished because of negligence but to put the entire blame on him because of the death of the noble is a wrong doing. I mean is he the only one who guard that noble man at that time?

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